Some Days

Some Days

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Every day is different from the last, so our emotions.

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Some days I am happy
Some days I am sad

Some days
I want to have fun
I want to cry
I want to do everything
I want to do nothing
I want to love
I want to hate
I want to sing
I want to scream
I want to remember
I want to forget
I want to help
I want to be selfish
Some days I feel all this before breakfast

© 2012


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I really like your poem... My suggestion (only an opinion), I would leave the first "Somedays" and exclude the rest, until the last verse...and add more of why you feel these emotions... What makes you happy, sad, cry, etc...
I would end with the last verse as is.~(again just a suggestion)
A Good Start...Nice write. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I really like your poem... My suggestion (only an opinion), I would leave the first "Somedays" and exclude the rest, until the last verse...and add more of why you feel these emotions... What makes you happy, sad, cry, etc...
I would end with the last verse as is.~(again just a suggestion)
A Good Start...Nice write. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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