Moonlight Swim

Moonlight Swim

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Water makes my troubles wash away.

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I creep down a hidden path.

Nothing but the sound of crickets in the air.

The moon gives just enough light to tell where I am going.

I undress.

No one can see.

There is not a soul here except for me.

Stepping forward the cool water runs across my feet.

I jump in.

The feeling of water surrounds me.

I feel weightless.

All my troubles and bad thoughts just wash away.

I am filled with relaxation.

The stars that reflect in the dark water makes it look like I am floating in the night sky.

Water is my drug its impossible to stay away.

There is nothing more peaceful.

The stars fade away.

The night sky turns bright.

How time flies when your enjoying the simple pleasures in life.

© 2010


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Wow so true. This is a great poem. Great job

Posted 10 Years Ago


nice poetic expression..

Posted 10 Years Ago


Whoa......nicely written! Well done

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is really good, i love how you express that water is you drug, and the pleasure in the simple things of life because it really is true, that the simple things are worth so much more.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is really beautiful. I like
"The stars that reflect in the dark water makes it look like I am floating in the night sky.

Water is my drug its impossible to stay away."

Very nice.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on August 25, 2010
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