Feminine

Lush Lush Lush,

Slush slush slush,

Oh how this feeling

elopes desires.

 

Hush hush hush,

Crush crush crush,

Pink satin lips

as rain drips.

 

Drip Trip

D

i

p

 

inside

 

and

Shush 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Chelsea]

Very nicely written. The flow carries out consistently through the entire poem. It's a relaxing poem to read, a gentle pice of work! As for criticismn, can't give any. You did it way to well !!
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100/100 & added to my favourites!

[goltinfron_nh]

I like this. It has a very sensual and fun feel to it. Nice work

[Ari and Sylph]

cute and playful. Good Job

[David W Moore III]

crush pink satin lips as rain drops.. an inviting sentence if I've ever heard one. great imagery with few words. love it

[Aven]

fresh, vibrant and playful. :)

[YouoweYoupay]

This piece has a soft, relaxing soundeffect. Nice write.

-Wella.

[victoria]

wow this poem was so light, it made me smile. great write :D

[Ray]

Wow... it's simply amazing...I felt everything...if i'm suppose to

[Blossom]

amazing. really vivid. I like the composition you can almost feel everything that was being said.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

enigmatic beautiful~ love the artistic composition which boosts the overall texture of thoughts popping open like flower buds into bloom~