Hearts & Thoughts

Hearts & Thoughts

A Poem by

abandoned children.


You left me
You hurt me


So, i wanted to say this, but...

I wouldn't know where to begin
I couldn't explain where my heart has been


So i wanted you to know this, because you wern't around


Know that my eyes saw right through you
You spoke to me without a sound


I wanted you to protect me
from all of the things youve already endured


I wanted you to show me

 everything this life had instore


But you left me

You hurt me


So, i wanted to say this...




© 2010

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Wow I'm sorry for your pain. It was clearly evident in the poem the emotional pain she left. It hurt to read it. I'm sorry

Posted 12 Years Ago

I REALLY like this, at first I thought it was just another break-up poem -a good one, but one none the less- and as i got to the end and read the last line my mind was blown. I was SWEPT with emotion. Very good read.

Posted 12 Years Ago

that is direct enough

Posted 12 Years Ago

Powerful expressing write.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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4 Reviews
Added on December 10, 2010
Last Updated on December 10, 2010
Tags: Mom, Pain, Hurt, Left, Alone, Heart


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