Hearts & Thoughts

Hearts & Thoughts

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abandoned children.

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You left me
You hurt me

 

So, i wanted to say this, but...


I wouldn't know where to begin
I couldn't explain where my heart has been

 

So i wanted you to know this, because you wern't around

 

Know that my eyes saw right through you
You spoke to me without a sound

 

I wanted you to protect me
from all of the things youve already endured

 

I wanted you to show me

 everything this life had instore

 

But you left me

You hurt me

 

So, i wanted to say this...

 

I HATE YOU MOM

 

© 2010


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Wow I'm sorry for your pain. It was clearly evident in the poem the emotional pain she left. It hurt to read it. I'm sorry

Posted 12 Years Ago


I REALLY like this, at first I thought it was just another break-up poem -a good one, but one none the less- and as i got to the end and read the last line my mind was blown. I was SWEPT with emotion. Very good read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


that is direct enough

Posted 12 Years Ago


Powerful expressing write.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on December 10, 2010
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