Paranoid

Paranoid

A Poem by
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A very short description of a paranoid mind .

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Fear and terror ,
have scared trust away .
They have invited suspicion,
to come and stay .

The mind , phobic , paranoid ,
in an endless search for safer .
A straight line appears crooked
on a crumpled piece of paper .

© 2011


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Wow...the end is just so fantastic...you brought this piece together with the end.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like the poem. Honest and direct words. Easy to be paranoid in a world with no guarantees. I like the complete poem. A strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


Intense!
A powerful and intoxicating infusion of such a topic, unsettling but great! xx

Posted 10 Years Ago


Masterly put down:
"The mind , phobic , paranoid ,
in an endless search for safer .
A straight line appears crooked
on a crumpled piece of paper ."

~M.Babu~

Posted 10 Years Ago


Again one of your fine works... your expressions are much more stronger now.... Simply amazing...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very well said..Valentine

Posted 10 Years Ago


Fear will definitely warp ones perception, well written Abhijit

Posted 10 Years Ago


They way you tell this is excellent and I agree with everyone the last two lines brought it home for me.. maybe I can relate to that thought;) xx

Posted 10 Years Ago


you seem to know well one of the things that face all writers and poets and artists the uncertainty

Posted 10 Years Ago



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