~Macabre Magnifique

~Macabre Magnifique

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~ Many see death as somthing very scary, or eerie. While there is true beauty in it...

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~Macabre Magnifique


 

Enjoyment in small scale

Acceptance of death

By early years,

As I dance on my so

 

Majeur Macabre

Magnifique as liquid can burn

Your stomache for

The dance of the death

 

With your feet on white

Lilies light, as a feather

In the dusk of the evening

Rotate and move like a marionette

 

Your hair is dancing in the wind

It is the last shimmering light you see, 

Until new light is being announced

In a new world full of desire

Aware just of your last dance

 

Your life is like music can entrust

Each felt note from your soul

From eternity, and lightly grow

In the next green timeless eras

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

© 2013


Author's Note

~ My second write about the Danse Macabre, read also one of my earlier works:

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Elisisciousz/811513/




Thank you xx

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Dear E.L.,

Excellent choice in music. I enjoy classical music as it allows a breath of art through vision. I think of a waltz between death and eternity. Wow, I just looked up what "macabre" meant and it makes me realize this is extremely darkly written. It's ironic and makes a pleasant oxymoron of bliss and death. The music plus the poem itself takes me to a night of romantic contrast between life, death, and music. Indeed there is beauty in death for death is not an ending, but a new beginning into what you have called "timeless eras." Or perhaps death gives inspiration to timeless eras of music. I find this piece to be romantic and relative to the beautiful music you have here.

My favorite lines are: "Your hair is dancing in the wind
It is the last shimmering light you see,
Until new light is being announced
In a new world full of desire
Aware just of your last dance"

Well done!

Sincerely Victorious

God bless you!

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Thank you dear one, as you do your name honor! Veni vedi vici.... dear soul.... Yes, you capture it .. read more



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I love the music choice, didn't know you could do that... how long have i been gone?

Anyway very nice write, I loved the read and the way it flows around while you read it... Great job :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TamerQtaish

9 Years Ago

huh? how come?
TamerQtaish

9 Years Ago

oh yes Netherlands

9 Years Ago

Yes... :)
give 'em hell, E.L.
you write so well
so many a story
yet to tell! and i freekin' love this one!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much for this nice rap Quinny lol :)
quinfinn

9 Years Ago

s'all good...just call me P-nutty
Marie

9 Years Ago

Does anybody call you anything else?
There is always something positive in the most dark of times if only we could see it then and not later. Excellent write!

Thanks for posting this in my group Shades of Darkness.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Thanks dear
Tina Kline

9 Years Ago

You;re welcome.
"With your feet on white

Lilies light, as a feather

In the dusk of the evening

Rotate and move like a marionette"~ Beautifully depicted Eli! The music is magnificent, complimenting the "dance of death". This is Grandeur at it's finest... You have written a masterpiece!


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Hi sis, oh thank you so much, dear one. Your words mean the world to me... ♥ xxx
Lovely write and music enhances the message that death is not to be feared but a continuation of life in another form. The green colour soothing too .

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Moon, it's my favorite color, the one of the sea. Glad to see you around always! :.. read more
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Sky
"Your hair is dancing in the wind
It is the last shimmering light you see,
Until new light is being announced"- So beautiful!
The whole piece is enchanting. I love the music, BTW...it's amazing!


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear Leone, it is the danse Macabre *Dance of the Death" and I did an earlier writ.. read more
I like the way you describe in vivid image the dance of death, which is no longer scary, it`s somehow connected with freedom and reality, it attracts beauty...The "white lilies" are strong symbol of purity and peace, they could be related also to the image of dead, dressed in white and full of glory. As the death is beginning of another life and freedom...
~nia

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Yes sweetheart you pick it all out, you know me best and you noticed it all well :))) thank you Nia .. read more
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Pax
"The dance of the death"
~what a lovely imagery in a dark tone, scary infact but I know its life's twin brother or so i presume..
Excellent choice of words my friend.
Beautiful!


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9 Years Ago

Always so happy to see you by Willyam thank you dearly.
what a pleasure to read this ...death should be a celebration! A new beginning...you and me are on the same wavelength xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


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9 Years Ago

Yes we are dear one! so nice to have you by, it is so true! I have always seen it as a celebration. .. read more

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