~ O' Mar

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~ One of my recurring visions, I have since I was a girl of 16, and one who always follows me.

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~ O' Mar

 

 

 

It happened again, I wandered back

On my Portuguese coast, where I

Every two months have a richly

Returning vision as I walk

In my white cotton robe

Which hits the seabed

And where the shells kiss my feet

 

This time you ran there again,

With your white linen trousers, and your bare

Upper body, again your face was not visible

Your presence always as highly with your

Telepathic hugs, the distance became shorter

Of time, and slow motion, all running towards me

 

The ever eternal recurring dream

Your wonderful blank face,

But the love around your corpo

That speaks volumes, and hits me

To the depths of my soul.

 

The mystery has never consummated

Higher volts, and can’t be disclosed

By coating only dreams

How gold and sweet they can be,

Reality is a waterway of the future

 

And with lost days and romantic visions

I often turn back, like it embraces me

When the mind is finally rested, it searches me,

Because I saw that man, with his

Headless body glisten in imagination,

And he saw me…

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

© 2013


Author's Note

~ This is a write about a rich vision, and mystery I have since I was 16, and it always turns back on me once or twice within two months.... It is never solved... it has a huge elusive meaning to me. (It is also the second write on this vision I wrote).

The music is of one of my favorite Fado singers, in duet originally... as the ancient song always haunts the vision I have. Just if you have the need, click on the music add... ; )



Thank you xx

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We dream what the mind nudges but not always what the heart needs. Time ticks back and forth in dreams, and, we sleepers and dreamers try to chase it - sometimes it stays still long enough for us to see right through and understand, But other times it swings like a jewel on a golden chain, teasing.. taunting .. like your headless man .. the one waiting for a title, a name, eyes with which to gaze into yours.

Your writing varies in theme so often, you have such vibrant imagination .. tis all powerful in its own way, hard to say, thank you and instantly leave!

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11 Years Ago

Beautifully expressed dearest x thank you for your words... P.s.mailed you hugs x



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you write very well and always provoke imagery you cant ignore, well done

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11 Years Ago

Thank you very much Hundi
We dream what the mind nudges but not always what the heart needs. Time ticks back and forth in dreams, and, we sleepers and dreamers try to chase it - sometimes it stays still long enough for us to see right through and understand, But other times it swings like a jewel on a golden chain, teasing.. taunting .. like your headless man .. the one waiting for a title, a name, eyes with which to gaze into yours.

Your writing varies in theme so often, you have such vibrant imagination .. tis all powerful in its own way, hard to say, thank you and instantly leave!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Beautifully expressed dearest x thank you for your words... P.s.mailed you hugs x
I have been waiting for you to publish this one ... reoccurring dreams are so unearthly amazing .. perhaps you headless wonder stands beside you ( ;

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11 Years Ago

Haha that would be great, hope those man have no head, and linnen white pants on.... ; ) and open to.. read more
Renée

11 Years Ago

umm well more surfer types with heads and no linen pants..but the torso's i think you would find acc.. read more

11 Years Ago

Ha! ok.... now I'm curious anyway ;) *(my old soul, is seeing those damn white linnen pants all over.. read more
This is a very personal write as I found it a mixture of your reality and your dream. It sounds like an outcome of your conscious and subconscious resulting a beautiful work of art:) When we dream, we dream about things that we have to deal with or what we are thinking about or wanted to have. I think our dreams give attention to these things. So I guess the man in your dream is the man you longed to be with. Thank you for yet again a very good write:)


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11 Years Ago

Thank you Maryanne, for your thoughts, and wonderful words.
Dreams, the great unsolved mystery. A wonder to who brought you the vision, and what purpose. Perhaps to make you question, too keep dreaming. Maybe the answer will come to you in time.

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11 Years Ago

Who knows... thank you Kenaz :)
Exquiste detail!

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11 Years Ago

Thank you dear one! xo
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intriguing work my friend...filled with rich emotions of the past...leaves us in wonders of the time and remember those moments once or twice in each passing day...
great work!

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11 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Willyam..
Such a vision, so surreal.

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11 Years Ago

Thank you Kenneth :)
Am I the only reviewer who thinks that a dream will probably never be properly or fully interpreted by the conscious mind?--that it is primarily the province of the subconscious.
While the subconscious certainly has a powerful effect on the conscious mind--and, therefore, on one's entire life--this quirky intelligence typically works through strong compulsion, inexplicable hunches and sudden whim.
Dreams appear to be deep inner-talk; using symbols the conscious mind rarely remembers--and if it does--frequently only pretends to understand.
I suppose what I'm saying, is that communication has been--and is being--made; the results of that mysterious dialogue will eventually manifest itself through the "informed" individual's following of some curious inner urging--at the right time and in the right place.
One has but to live until that "revelation"--and not, in the meantime--confuse one's self with merry-go-round speculation.
A lovely, starkly-imaged and, obviously, thought-provoking bit of work, Elisa.

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11 Years Ago

A very very clever insight dear sir, I'm soooo glad you came by! I feel within you a rationalist, vs.. read more

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