~ Modest and Unaware

~ Modest and Unaware

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~ E.L. Poetry Love, Light, Friendship, Patience

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~ Modest and Unaware

 

 

You created mother nature

In your wet lost arms

For African trees became

Northern European

Bald but with a secret flame

Where cold is felt through

Every barren bone

In fair cold of pain can feel

But here are summers too

To let melt your veins

From out of frozen winters

Modest and Unaware

You embrace the right light

Of love and the voice of

My heart spoken as pale

As could be sung

Not wanting to

To wither, you

As the sun on the equator

Can burn

With  too much love

But as silent as sharp light

I shine, and observe

And as bright as I see thee

Rich and with honesty

Full of free purity

We move slowly

Around the axis

Of newer yesteryears

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

 

 

 

© 2012


Author's Note



I came back from my roadtrip to Germany earlier than planned...
I had a song in my head on the way back... Enjoy

Thank you xx

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this piece touched me! its amazing soul-image of differences and similarities in the world...everyone is like piece from universe, whos voice we can hear..I loved the feeling of soft melancholy, the desire to touch heart of another..the close look to the spirit...mostly I loved the last verses!
Full of free purity
We move slowly
Around the axis
Of newer yesteryears


xx no♥r ~


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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much xx
Sugar Plum ♥

7 Years Ago

oh so beautiful shrift, dear eli! how can i use some shrift? I never succeed in that!

7 Years Ago

In your mail xxx :)



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this piece touched me! its amazing soul-image of differences and similarities in the world...everyone is like piece from universe, whos voice we can hear..I loved the feeling of soft melancholy, the desire to touch heart of another..the close look to the spirit...mostly I loved the last verses!
Full of free purity
We move slowly
Around the axis
Of newer yesteryears


xx no♥r ~


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much xx
Sugar Plum ♥

7 Years Ago

oh so beautiful shrift, dear eli! how can i use some shrift? I never succeed in that!

7 Years Ago

In your mail xxx :)
Hi darling, I hope that you won't mind me commenting that I am struggling with the font to read each word clearly, which is a shame because the content looks ever so interesting : (

Posted 7 Years Ago


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7 Years Ago

Hey hon, no, I can understand that... I was in doubt to pick this font, but I kind of write myself l.. read more
Here we go again: me couldn't think of anything to write and why is that? Because there's a great poet whose name is Elisa who just writes breath taking poems, and poor Gregster is scrambling around for words, trying to find the ones are just right, but he fails, because Elisa shook Gregster pretty good, for all of his words jump out of his body. Beautiful poem ;)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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7 Years Ago

Awww you're the best sweet Gregster, my friend and sweetheart. You make me happy! You are one of tho.. read more
Not Your Typical New Yorker

7 Years Ago

Awww, you're quite weclome

7 Years Ago

:)
The picture of the trees is amazing...first thought. Your beautifully written poetry is breathtaking...immediate second thought.

From your head to our delight; thank you for sharing this most expressive work with us.

-kimmer

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you Kimmer, your words are always a delight to read...
Beautifullly written, with thoughts of Hope for warmer days in the light. The cold does many things to our inner core, but the warmth will melt in our veins. What an amazing write!...a rich gift of honesty, indeed!

"You embrace the right light

Of love and the voice of

My heart spoken as pale

As could be sung

Not wanting to

To wither, you

As the sun on the equator"~Excellent write!


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you dearest :) hope to be around soon X
This is wonderful!

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7 Years Ago

Thanks
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Eve
good lord this is gorgeous.

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7 Years Ago

Thanks a lot
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Pax
wow a breath-taking tune of words.... music to the ears and thoughts.... another life journey to the depths of love, patiences and the balance of nature...
"Rich and with honesty, Full of free purity, We move slowly Around the axis Of newer yesteryears"
~ that alone making you swim free from the layers of yesteryears... full of beauty....

Brilliant write!!!

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7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Willyam. :)
so many great lines in this..."in your wet, lost arms"

nice..

this has such a nice feel ....the creation of nature...what a birth.

you are so visual.


jacob

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7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Jacob, for me said by you as a teacher in English, I feel humbled. So glad you enj.. read more
I never listen to the music you post.. for me your work is lovely enough without it...
Beautiful, serene visions you painted Dear Poetess

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

That is real sweet of you dear, thank you x

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