~ Amor II

~ Amor II

A Poem by
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~ Amor secondo, E.L. Elisa Laura, Poetry, love,

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~ Amor II

 

 

Real love doesn’t ask for much

It dwells on the perfect skies,

It embraces the richer shores

It has golden treads lighter than speed

 

For me it is a thing I always had,

I lost it, but found it back again,

I saw it sparkling against the streams

And it whispered my ambience

 

Love is something to hold on strong;

Among the different changing spaces

The waves of natural kindred flows,

And in the daily eyes of people’s faces

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

 

© 2013


Author's Note

This is a write I did when I was with my love in Andalucia lately. The sky was filled with ozon, as it could thunder every minute... it brought me thoughts, as I wrote them, as in life thunders can be there, but after rain you know what will come~
And I hope you enjoy it :) always do what you must :)

P.s. the title " ~ Amor II means the second write about "Amor I wrote, the other one is still onder construction, but it will be here in no time....as the (same title I used...) "
as Amor is Spanish for Love.

E.L.


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"Love is something to hold on strong" Yes indeed, yet so many people make the mistake of holding too strong, crushing and breaking what they cherish the most, so sad... Love the positive energy that emerges from this piece, it breathes on large spaces, the skies, the shores... devastating to lose love, but invigorating to find "it back again". You have a smart philosophy on your subject, beautiful writing once again!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Oooh thank you so much sithlordjp :D so good to have your thoughts by always.

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So Lovely E L ... love never asks .. it just gives and should be cherished ...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Exactly love, I'm pissed off tonight, but I'll will be back for your lovely writes.... much love dea.. read more
Renée

11 Years Ago

never worry about reading luv... you take care xo
very nice sweet images written in a wonderful way..

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much xxxx
khalid

11 Years Ago

my pleasure
"Love is something to hold on strong" Yes indeed, yet so many people make the mistake of holding too strong, crushing and breaking what they cherish the most, so sad... Love the positive energy that emerges from this piece, it breathes on large spaces, the skies, the shores... devastating to lose love, but invigorating to find "it back again". You have a smart philosophy on your subject, beautiful writing once again!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Oooh thank you so much sithlordjp :D so good to have your thoughts by always.

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Pax
Great music choice... i felt the Spanish love as i read it....
i always love your definitions of love...
it evolve as it speaks its true nature...
an awesome piece you have here...
a sequel that is worth to read!
brilliant dearest!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Oh thank you so much dearest friend, it is so good to have you by again, and I'm truly sorry I'm so .. read more
Pax

11 Years Ago

i so love the music... it so relaxing... though i hate my internet slow connection it keeps on buffe.. read more

11 Years Ago

Oh buffering is bad.... :-( yes, this is a song from my roots... so glad you love it. :) If you hear.. read more
The last rhyme was really good and at least these two magical lines:

1. It has golden treads lighter than speed
2. And in the daily eyes of people’s faces

The idea that love is easy for you was also nice. Great love poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much Michael for your thoughts! :)
you do love poems so naturally, there is no pretention..no focus on convention...just a natural flow of love that feels like it moved the pen.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

I just watched and listened... the weather, the love, and nature, thank you dear friend. :)
Beautiful poetry and amazing music. Real love need a open door and a lot of free time. Real love need patience and desire to fulfill the person we love and need. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Oh my friend, thank you for your beautiful review. Yes, Real love need a open door, and a lot of fre.. read more
When you write like this, I get carried away....for me, Love is a magical journey. A place where we long to go, wrapped in it's warm embrace. And if we are lucky, it will let us stay...
You have depicted the spirit of Love, and it is everywhere. Breathtaking write, Sis!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

That is so true beautiful soul sister, and sweetest friend.
The love I refound is much deeper .. read more
You bring light and love to a world that is in desperate need of it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Oh, so great to have you by my friend, thank you so very much....
You pen the moments cherished in life and love as if preserved and mounted trophies on the walls of poetry. Yet your trophies live and breath. They roar and lick their lips, knowing the power they wield over the hearts that find their gaze...
How very lovely!


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Awww thank you so much... When I wrote this write, I looked to Marroc from Southeren Andalucia (Spai.. read more

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