~ Endless

~ Endless

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Endless, E.L. Elisa laura, Poetry

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~ Endless

 

 

The road was difficult

Days without light

Suffocating narrowness

Claustrophobic smallness

Little breath

 

Wandering in

The last pure power

A living dream

An endless battle

The metamorphosis

 

Now from the mountain looking

On the doomed fields

The landscape without water

The grim without hope

No light in sight, ever ~

 

Wings were spread

Senses sharp

The eagle left

While marking his footsteps

On the snowy top

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

© 2013


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Just wanna say first off that the picture really helps visualize this piece and that the third stanza really helps describe the picture. It's always tough to feel as if we have no hope or no way of resovling our problems. A world without light would then depend on darkness. A world without problems would depend on peace and harmony. If at all, we always have to depend on something along the road.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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DoNt LoSe YoUrSeLf

9 Years Ago

You are very welcome :) And I also love the title of this by the way!

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear :-) always happy to have you by
DoNt LoSe YoUrSeLf

9 Years Ago

Welcome :) Anytime!



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You're right. This does parallel the thoughts conveyed in my piece. Except yours is calm and unnerving... it displays a portal of transition to the unknown. Frightening, yet intriguing. A unique writer you are.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Thank you dear friend, I had a near death experience, last June... after I wrote this, when I felt s.. read more
I got lost in these words for a moment... But the best part is, I wasn't in a hurry to find my way back. I walked around, with my thoughts, with your words: "Wandering in / The last pure power" like you said... Well done, and thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
This reminds me of an elongated Haiku; very nicely conveyed, the scene.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

It could be one, split up all in 5-7-5 syllables, but I was just carving the moment I guess :) and n.. read more
a hard journey...but we grow from them and when we do ... we fly higher because of the strength & endurance we gained.... great job Elise !

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Thank you sweet Renée :)
This was absolutely beautiful dear! The words were so powerful and the flow was great! Well done and very moving fantastic piece! xox

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

s y e

9 Years Ago

Anytime sweetie xox

9 Years Ago

:) xx
s y e

9 Years Ago

:-D xox
This is uplifting, no pun intended. Relaxing imagery that saddens me in the end, but in a good way.
Feels like the journal of a traveler; a lonely one.
Great piece!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

You felt that very well Inda. I was with my husband on travel, but This one I walked alone...
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Inda

9 Years Ago

Yes the loneliness of the poet is real and often times necessary.

9 Years Ago

Yes, it is.... it is..... and it is wonderful to be lonely now and then, it opens doors, richer visi.. read more
A true time of transition, described perfectly.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much m'lady :) so good to see you again welcome back xx
Kimberly "Melody" Carney

9 Years Ago

slowly~but~surely...here I come. ;) missed you and you writings!

9 Years Ago

I'm so happy you are back, even when slowly, please take all the time you need... your writings are .. read more
Dang! I'm sitting here with my hands swollen and my nerves on fire feeling like this Hell is endless. Nothing ever seems to change. The Eagle soars but lands and digs in with sharp talons...
Your writing my heart out in black and white today! Your like a fairy godmother. Ha

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Oh sigh, and geez, thank you, I made you feel it so profound, I must admit this was a real sentiment.. read more
Wow...just like the migration story via the land bridge from up there to north america...
u made me see the flashback of a novel i read....

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poetry-kiddo alienbaba

9 Years Ago

im sure u will remember

9 Years Ago

:-) That makes me smile, now I get it....
poetry-kiddo alienbaba

9 Years Ago

yeh
What a wonderful piece of work, Elisa. From the picture to the music you helped me visualize what were words were capturing. Your creativity took me on the journey. Thanks for such a powerful, thought provoking piece, loved it.




Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much VITD, for your review, and the time to read me. :)
Traci

9 Years Ago

You're quite welcome, I look forward to reading more of your work, as I am sure it will be as wonder.. read more

9 Years Ago

Thank you, that means a lot to me! I've read your piece, and it's beautiful, very impressive! :-)

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