~ Endless

~ Endless

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Endless, E.L. Elisa laura, Poetry

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~ Endless

 

 

The road was difficult

Days without light

Suffocating narrowness

Claustrophobic smallness

Little breath

 

Wandering in

The last pure power

A living dream

An endless battle

The metamorphosis

 

Now from the mountain looking

On the doomed fields

The landscape without water

The grim without hope

No light in sight, ever ~

 

Wings were spread

Senses sharp

The eagle left

While marking his footsteps

On the snowy top

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

© 2013


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Just wanna say first off that the picture really helps visualize this piece and that the third stanza really helps describe the picture. It's always tough to feel as if we have no hope or no way of resovling our problems. A world without light would then depend on darkness. A world without problems would depend on peace and harmony. If at all, we always have to depend on something along the road.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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DoNt LoSe YoUrSeLf

11 Years Ago

You are very welcome :) And I also love the title of this by the way!

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear :-) always happy to have you by
DoNt LoSe YoUrSeLf

11 Years Ago

Welcome :) Anytime!



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Hopeful and pure. A delightful read, Elisa!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

My heart thanks your words.... dear soul! xxx
there is always hope............brilliant sweet sister

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Love you for saying that my soulsister.... you're cracking me up! thanks a lot! x
Lovely and so many ways this can be read... A mountain trekker making it to the foresaken peak or an apocalyptic vision... I love your words "Wandering in the last pure power," simply vision inspiring as we all seek for ourselves the powers the universe holds.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

;-) sister you felt both... Wonderful visions, thank you greatly! p.s. I will mail you soon! just ha.. read more
Horizon K.

11 Years Ago

Ok Soulsister!!! Can't wait! Have a great weekend!

11 Years Ago

I work on it :-) it's a lot to tell..... You too soul! much fun, and have a great time, ~ Namaste
Just wanna say first off that the picture really helps visualize this piece and that the third stanza really helps describe the picture. It's always tough to feel as if we have no hope or no way of resovling our problems. A world without light would then depend on darkness. A world without problems would depend on peace and harmony. If at all, we always have to depend on something along the road.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

DoNt LoSe YoUrSeLf

11 Years Ago

You are very welcome :) And I also love the title of this by the way!

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear :-) always happy to have you by
DoNt LoSe YoUrSeLf

11 Years Ago

Welcome :) Anytime!
mysterious, captivating, a feeling that every line belongs to its own distinct moment. I imagine it was penned whilst travelling, perchance walking, and edged out slowly.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Yes, it was. You did felt that right. Thank you John for your insight, and review.
such heighten senses and closed in desolation between the cramped lines of this thought provoking piece..makes me want to stretch out my arms and see how far and wide I can reach...great poem

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you my friend, I appreciate you, and your words.

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