~ The Land of Her

E.L. Fantasy, Elisa Laura, Surreal Tea Cup, Cup of Tea, The Land of Her, Sleeping

~ The Land of Her

 

Let her sleep in beauty’s landscape

Do not ever wake her up

Leave the little birdies singing

For she is dreaming in her cup

 

Let the trees play with all fresh air,

And  let the climate change

Let every season but to come

And accept this isn’t strange

 

Do never touch her sensitive skin

Before she will be awake

Dance with her thoughts while she’s asleep

That’s the beauty you should take

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

 

Author's Note

Enjoy! xx

Reviews

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Powerful write Eli, I could feel the emotion in this. So I went and read it like a few times more :) I know the path, peace and tranquillity, but the small things within that world, couldn't allow it because without the Land the small things wouldn't have a place and there would be a humongous gap. But all things knew,butterflies and ants alike, that they couldn't speak only pray... Well done Eli you wrote a fabulous poem!! :) loved the way you wrote this well done.

Dank je wel lieffie, voor je mooie woorden ;) I'm so glad you liked this older one of me. Sleep is something so special, and I really like it what you got out of it my sweet friend. Thank you so much.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

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[Michael X]

Your words create a vision of peace and art and beauty, it is lovely.

I must thank you gratefully for seeing that.... :-)

[MOON]

The world of dreams surreal and healing . Love this shorter write of yours says so much , picture precious!

Thank you very much Moon, yes, I'm still experimenting in writing... less is often more... :) hugs! x

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Ike a lullabuy yessss
So sooothing n serene

Thank you my friend :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

luuulllabbbyyyy

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Such sweet sentiments, Eli!...let her dream her little dream. The reverie of this piece is a lovely world to enjoy.
"Let her sleep in beauty’s landscape

Do not ever wake her up

Leave the little birdies singing

For she is dreaming in her cup"~adorable write!

I guess, I'm into lullaby's lately LOL ;-) thank you so much sissy x

[krish]

hey........hey............one more thing the pic. u've applied here is totally fit according to ur's poem word's.

Thanks again Shivam :)

[krish]

very nice + beautiful = dreaming....poem.....i liked it.
you know what; instead of very short in written,it's work...... really......
u;ve converted the dream's into reality....
i liked these below lines.......:-)
"LET HER SLEEP & DON'T TOUCH HER SENSITIVE SKIN......."
SO......this time i wanna give you 92/100.

Thank you :D

[krish]

aahhh.....it's coolllllll....

[PurpleQuartz]

There is no other word but beautiful that comes to mind when I read this. I feel quite inspired :)

And I feel honored to have you by PQ :) I will come back for you :)

[PurpleQuartz]

: )

[Distant horizons]

So simple, yet complexly beautiful. Sometimes, all we need is a reminder of the fragility of true beauty. Maybe all the moms and dads of the world are right in telling children not to touch. Some things are just meant to be seen and cherished for being seen. Not everything in life is a posession. Some things, should remain a beautiful memory. Beautifully captured, as ever Elisa

Thanks my dear, your words make me think.... you have always another really great view on my work :) So love that! :)

[Distant horizons]

:-)

[J. J. Nightingale]

Let her find her rest in sleep
Dreaming dreams in a far off place
She takes no never, never mind
And breathes so still
At heaven's gate ..

I can't tell you how much this means to me .. I remember waiting for a loved to wake, and I prayed that where ever she was, she had peace .. .. tears fall remembering it all ..........

Love, and hugs .. You are so dear to me ............ Jazz

Oh dear, I'm so touched by your words, if my poem did that to you, and brought you back these precious memories... That's why I still write for you guys, love and a big hug Jazzy XXX

[J. J. Nightingale]

You young lady, have a gift .. It is a gift from God .. You touch hearts, and remind us of Love ..............

........................... ♥

[J. J. Nightingale]

I just had a bad Asthma attack, a few minutes ago .. started passing out .. I tell you this because, if we love someone, and they touch our hearts, we should tell them .. none of us know how much time we have left .. Always remember LOVE ...... xx

Oh dear, I'm so sorry you had... are you ok now? Did you inhaled with (your inhaler)? I know how bad these are..... Yes, we should love more. It is something to hold strong on.... And I am so happy with you my friend! X :) please take good care of you ok!

[J. J. Nightingale]

I am going for my meds now .. 2 inhalers and more .. Good night Dear .. Hugs .. xx Jazzy

Uffff heavy..... I give you a big hug, and be well sweet lovely lady.... x Goodnight X

[Belle]

The song both of the poem and the one that is playing are mesmerizing.
Eli is truly synonymous to beauty.
I can totally relate to this one since I have a gentleboy wherein I know of the fact about the fragility of being in a state of sleeping. Disturbing one while asleep specially for children does not only create bad mood but it also affects the mental development of a child. I think this applies too to older one, not in the term of mental development but in a sense that we live in a harsh reality of life and sleep dreaming can be a escape from this even for a while :)

Thank you dear Belle, for your insights, on my poem. It is true what you say, sleep is so important, for each of us... and to dream, even more... Thank you so much for your words... I hope your little one, will sleep always without being waked. Hugs xx