~ In my Garden

E.L. Elisa Laura, In my Garden, Piano, Music, Notes, Touch, Peaceful, Quiet

 

~ In my Garden

 

 

In my Garden you rest, 

So beautiful, so quiet,

Dreaming, and sleeping

While your spirit moves,

And dances on winter's notes

I will awake you softly,

By each touch, to let melt

The snow, in your heart,

And awake your body

So we can dance together,

When time passes

On soften sunsets

Each moment anew...

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx
:)

Reviews

[Jack...]

Wow, so very exquisite are your words this day, so soft and alluring, tempting and timeless. I am a pianist and seeing the black grand in the white snow has gievn my heart a spin, oh how I would love to be sitting there playing among this beautiful winter scene. You poem has touched me deeply, thank you so much for sharing this with all of us.

Thanks a million Jack, :) we should play one time together then... :)
I felt in a musical mood, (when not) actually... glad you enjoyed this, and thank you for stopping by again. I'll be back for your fantastic poetry. :)

[Jack...]

Elisa, I have one song posted here that I wrote the lyrics, music and arrangement for if you'd like to here it. I wrote it for a friend, so i don't sing it, but it is my song. I can send you an rr if you like. It is titled, And here you come.

Yes, ofcourse, thank you, good recommendations, especially from a singer songwriter as you are most welcome! :) I don't do RR's, since I came here, but you can mail me, or put the link here :) Thank you my friend, I shall listen... :)

[CS]

I am pretty sure this is what my piano looks like too. Except it isn't snow it is covered in, it is dust. I haven't played it for so long, I am pretty sure it has forgotton all about me. Though with one touch, it springs back to life. That is the best part about art. It never dies, it just goes into hibernation. I love the thought of you melting new music with the heat of your fingers on the keys. Exquisite.

May you continue to make beautiful music together :)

You my best, understood it! and me... as a fellow pianist, your words dance here so wisely upon my soul, thank you love, I'll be back soon, missing you already... xx

[CS]

You take your time, sis, and my best of luck on your new artistic projects!
You're welcome :) X

Will mail you soon :) X thanks for understanding....

[Kristallo]

"While you're spirit moves, and dances on winter notes." Lovely line, I really enjoyed that. This is a delicate and sweetly minimalist poem that found to be so delightfully fresh. You have a unique way about you, it's like a light, feminine touch. Very sublime and nicely written. Great work.

Thank you dear Kris your words are little treasures, or musical notes for me. - Elisa most appreciated ♫

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I love this, Elisa:) The image you have painted for me is so beautiful. Great job ,my dear :))))

All I can do is smile.... thank you dear Cord :)

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You're Welcome :)))

[SeekingMeaning]

"Winter's notes." That's a lovely picture that immediately makes me think of both snow and music. Nice phrasing!

Thank you my new friend, I will be back for your artworks xxx

[Distant horizons]

I can sooo picture tat piano in your garden, with you playing it as the snow falls around you :-)

I get the feeling of renewal from this piece Elisa, but fresh snow always makes me think of wiping the slate clean and the world being painted anew. Beatiful, soft words.

Thank you sweetheart.... we talk soon! already missing you x

[Distant horizons]

:-)
and

(x)

[David Scott]

I'm not sure if I want to rest or get woken up... You make both prospects seem delicious! A wonderful picture of words.

Thank you dear Scott. That was my intention, to play with words... :) be back for you soon!

[Androglossia]

Intricate and beautifully penned my dear. Your words are like Dandelion puppies wafting over white snow. Very soft and tender. I loved it:)

I like the way how you talk here dearest... thank you so much! :) so glad you loved it, that's why I'm still writing now and then...

[Androglossia]

As always:)