~ There Where the Trees Danced

~ There Where the Trees Danced, Elisa Laura, E.L. Fantasy, Other Dimensions, Fiction, Free style

~ There Where the Trees Danced

 

 

Yes  finally ...

 

 

There was light, after days of darkness

An early morning sun, smiled

 

 

                       The fog became a soft cotton blanket

                       The trees awoke with every sparkling

 

 

Slow movements, and limbs

The time delay in all presence

 

 

                       There was more oxygen, we survived

                       Did we? awakened from a dark wandering

 

 

Without gravity, or am I dreaming?

The trees seem to dance, without roots

 

 

                        I wonder where we are, where are we?

                        In mind? or reality?

 

 

There Where the Trees Danced

I felt your hand in mine...

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thanks for your entry... ;) xx

Reviews

[Kristallo]

This one flows with such harmony, and the imagery here is profoundly beautiful. "The trees awoke with every sparkling" is such a tender line, each couplet is sublime and visually tasteful. Each couplet is as artistically satisfying as the one preceding it, although I would have liked to see perhaps one more addition, it seemed to end so abruptly. But this was utopia in words. Very rhythmic and lovely. Great write.

Thank you so much dear Kristallo, I am so pleased you enjoyed this, and found it visually tasteful, it was my intention to make real imagery and kind of "film fragments" to my readers, I'm glad you said that. I will think of another more addition, thanks for suggesting me that. I'm grateful with your presence here. Thanks again :) - Elisa

[Souladareatease]

There was more oxygen, we survived
Did we? awakened from a dark wandering


Beautiful thing to be found=such great flow of earthen magic to this piece, great write!!!

Thank you so very much for your time, and review :)

[J.B.D]

WOW THAT WAS AMAZING!! :) i love the structure and the sound of the poem, B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L

Thank you so much :D

[beautiful dreamer]

"there was light after days of darkness" beautiful beautiful poem! i LOVED it! wonderful!

Thank you so much... :)

[beautiful dreamer]

welcome :)

[Aubin]

As always an incredible poem. I show all my friends your writing, and it is so inspiring. Thank you for writing!

Aw really? I feel so honored with you Aubin, x Eli

[S]

Feel free to drop by......

I will , and will support you in any way sweet person...

[S]

Hats off to your imagery, and hats off to you for writing it so well....
very creative piece...

You have no idea how grateful I'm to you ... X

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You always have a magnetic pull...here I am, entranced within this piece, and I don't want to wake up!...let me wander here for a while, for I can read this again and again...I am floating in this dream state...

Nobody paints the trees quite like you do, dear Eli...this is surreal!~xoxo~

Hey sis, thank you very much... Feel free to stay as long as you want dear... :))) you know I love to create dream scapes... X thank you lovely one

[Belle]

I do not have the mind to decipher tonight, but I must tell I enjoyed this as always from you. I've missed the site and you Dear Sis.

That does not matter sweetheart, your presence is enough ... ;) Take care sis

[Winslow Des Totes]

Aw this is lovely

Thank you ...