~ There Where the Trees Danced

~ There Where the Trees Danced, Elisa Laura, E.L. Fantasy, Other Dimensions, Fiction, Free style

~ There Where the Trees Danced

 

 

Yes  finally ...

 

 

There was light, after days of darkness

An early morning sun, smiled

 

 

                       The fog became a soft cotton blanket

                       The trees awoke with every sparkling

 

 

Slow movements, and limbs

The time delay in all presence

 

 

                       There was more oxygen, we survived

                       Did we? awakened from a dark wandering

 

 

Without gravity, or am I dreaming?

The trees seem to dance, without roots

 

 

                        I wonder where we are, where are we?

                        In mind? or reality?

 

 

There Where the Trees Danced

I felt your hand in mine...

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thanks for your entry... ;) xx

Reviews

[Kristallo]

This one flows with such harmony, and the imagery here is profoundly beautiful. "The trees awoke with every sparkling" is such a tender line, each couplet is sublime and visually tasteful. Each couplet is as artistically satisfying as the one preceding it, although I would have liked to see perhaps one more addition, it seemed to end so abruptly. But this was utopia in words. Very rhythmic and lovely. Great write.

Thank you so much dear Kristallo, I am so pleased you enjoyed this, and found it visually tasteful, it was my intention to make real imagery and kind of "film fragments" to my readers, I'm glad you said that. I will think of another more addition, thanks for suggesting me that. I'm grateful with your presence here. Thanks again :) - Elisa

[Corset]

wonderful, there is such magic in this piece Ellie, I loved it, all of it!

Thank you sweetie, it means much to me, when you love my writings xx

[Reeti]

It's an uncanny and mystical write-up. The setting is in sync with the poem's conveyance of message. Reading this has helped me contrive a sweet level of comfort and wonder of imagination and fantasy.

That's great Reeti, thank you dear, I will come back for you soon... I promise! x

[Reeti]

You're welcome, Elisa! Feel free to drop by. =)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

again...wavy...savory...turmeric....pin-ball...
curtsey....civil..
womanly

Fun mix of together searched keywords....

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

owowowo

[Alexander Rodgers]

Awesome

Thank you :)

[Alexander Rodgers]

You're welcome :D

[MOON]

Lovely dreamy write with lovely imagery and the title so beautiful.

Thank you MOON :)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Such a sweet, sublime write. I love the way that the piece questions dreams and reality; quite poignant. The first two lines and the last two lines of this one are brilliant.

Thankies Girl! :) glad you liked it !

[Muse]

I can choose for a brief moment to put "differences" to the side and say...this was stunning work.

Thank you very much, glad you enjoyed it :)

[sharonlee]

Breathless dance Elisa! Fed my soul!

Thank you.

Thank you so much Sharonlee, xx

[ba_mcfarlane]

Such a sweet write, light as air, the words of love are right there...you are sooooo good.

Merci Canada :)