~ Infinitum-Reditus

~ Infinitum-Reditus

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~ Infinitum-Reditus, mirrors, ego, ancient, dark art, E.L. Elisa Laura

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~ Infinitum-Reditus

 

 

 

 Copper curled edges,

Creeping as size

Around this presence

Rusty quadrant hinges

Squeaky sounds

A creaking

Wooden floor

Full of cracks

 

And we…

 

In the center of

Our consciousness,

Looking deeper

Into our soul

Our future,

Our past

Where we are

And breathe

So boundless

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

© 2013


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Pax
a deeper look within the soul! ~ highly intriguin ~ i feel like i was drawn into the mirror of our old self, current self & the future one as well... we see it through our mind then process by our vast imagination, gliding from past to present till the future... we can only perceive it in our soul but fully grasp it is just a thought, either way hopefully it will come or not. I find this highly mysterious big sis, Great write as always ~

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8 Years Ago

Thank you Pax, sweetheart for your insightful review, love it! x
Pax

8 Years Ago

hey you ~ big sis hug ~ your most welcome ~ i haven't seen you much around, miss u~ take care always.. read more



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Pax
a deeper look within the soul! ~ highly intriguin ~ i feel like i was drawn into the mirror of our old self, current self & the future one as well... we see it through our mind then process by our vast imagination, gliding from past to present till the future... we can only perceive it in our soul but fully grasp it is just a thought, either way hopefully it will come or not. I find this highly mysterious big sis, Great write as always ~

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

Thank you Pax, sweetheart for your insightful review, love it! x
Pax

8 Years Ago

hey you ~ big sis hug ~ your most welcome ~ i haven't seen you much around, miss u~ take care always.. read more
Intense! & Awesome!
Profound beauty in poetry.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

Thank you kindly :)
I gave this poem to my sister, who is going thru something right now, as a
propitious example of how the poet of the 21st century is forever seeking
certainty from the uncertainty of physical truth. However much it stresses
the existence of objective proof.

Just be willing to look a little deeper in your soul.
Nicely written.
dana

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

8 Years Ago

Ah dana, I feel so honored with your visit, thank you dear. I hope all is ok, with her, and in my th.. read more
Oh such beauty in so few words. We must turn toward true selves in order to understand our place on this infinite plane. I found this to be very philosophical and compelling.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

8 Years Ago

Thank you for noticing all again what I was trying to mention dear woman... you're a special seeer! .. read more
icelandicblue

8 Years Ago

Oh Elisa I hope that you feel better soon!

8 Years Ago

Thanks, alot, it will be ok soon :) just rest, music, reading poetry, and I feel already a lot bette.. read more
Wow, mind blowing, amazing! Im speechless.....

Loved it! xoxox

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

s y e

8 Years Ago

Anytime! :-)

8 Years Ago

xoxo :)))
s y e

8 Years Ago

;-) xoxo
Oh, my.... infinite magic.

A friend had mentioned she liked your work, then I saw a review for one of your poems written by another mutual friend, so I had to check you out. After reading this, all I can say is, I am captivated.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

Thank you so very much.... Yes infinite magic :) welcome in my world :)
We focus so much on what we perceive with our eyes and ears, all the while completely ignoring what lies inside. There is so much to explore within and discover. Though, i must admit, from a madman's perspective that adventure is much more eventful and strange... What a horror it would be to look within oneself and find nothing?

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8 Years Ago

Yes, m'dear, you're so right, and as a madman or not, (I see them as the most intelligent persons by.. read more
RedInk524

8 Years Ago

Despite it always being said, it is finally proven that genius and madness are very related. lol, it.. read more

8 Years Ago

Ah yes, I could discous with you further on this in private... LOL, you're soooooooo f. true! and I .. read more
I love the deep feeling in your poems, only in few words you create a world full of charismatic feelings and thougths, of reflections and hyper realities...It`s one of my favorite poems!
{nia}
02.04.13

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8 Years Ago

That's a big compliment sweetheart. I'm grateful to you :) so so much!
Wow, classic eternal feeling I've got here. Brilliant piece, love it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

Thank you very much Marc, will come back for your work soon ;)
What I like here is the way the poem progresses and builds on a strong, opening image.
Fine job, well observed

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

Hi Leslie, Danke Shön! :)

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