~ Infinitum-Reditus

~ Infinitum-Reditus, mirrors, ego, ancient, dark art, E.L. Elisa Laura

~ Infinitum-Reditus

 

 

 

 Copper curled edges,

Creeping as size

Around this presence

Rusty quadrant hinges

Squeaky sounds

A creaking

Wooden floor

Full of cracks

 

And we…

 

In the center of

Our consciousness,

Looking deeper

Into our soul

Our future,

Our past

Where we are

And breathe

So boundless

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Pax]

a deeper look within the soul! ~ highly intriguin ~ i feel like i was drawn into the mirror of our old self, current self & the future one as well... we see it through our mind then process by our vast imagination, gliding from past to present till the future... we can only perceive it in our soul but fully grasp it is just a thought, either way hopefully it will come or not. I find this highly mysterious big sis, Great write as always ~

Thank you Pax, sweetheart for your insightful review, love it! x

[Pax]

hey you ~ big sis hug ~ your most welcome ~ i haven't seen you much around, miss u~ take care always... being busy it means that your life is always in order... come back if your not busy anymore...

[Ruth]

There is such a beautiful eternal quality to this...the world can spin and hide or show many mysterious things but...at the center...there we are...in awe or disbelief, stunning work, as always xoxo

Hi love, thank you so much for all on here, I'm so busy right now, but your words in between make me smile!!!! xoxo thanks!

[Distant horizons]

Ah, to look deeper into your soul, at all we are and were. Beautifully creative of you, as ever Elisa. I like this. I always liked the idea of ancient tribes considering the past in front of them, as they can see it, and the future behind them, as it is unseen, the complete opposite of what we are told to think, yet it makes much more sense their way. I'm sitting here now looking over my shoulder to see if i can catch a glimpse of saturdays lotto numbers :-)

Oh my Lorry love your pic!!!! ha that's awesome my little Shrek :P thank you so much for this beautiful review, full of feelers.... you always get me! my friend.... :)

[Distant horizons]

:-)

Talk soon my friend, take care :-) x

[Ken Simm.]

As Jung fell through the floor of his house to reach his inner states you seem to use these words to document a similar spritual journey. And I've got to say do it remarkably well. This has both an inner and an outer beauty.
As above so below.

Hi Ken, thank you very much, nice you name Carl Jung here, you make me think into thinking again, deeper, richer, great review, a perfect snapshot of what I tried to bring over. Thank you so much. (I'll be back for yours, I've saved it already to my library)...

[David Scott]

I like how you created a word picture within a frame i the first stanza and then you open this fram as if it is a window into eternity in the second stanza. Well done EL

Thank you dear David for your words... :) always happy when you enter my world... I will be back for reviews as soon as I have a bit more spare time :)

[Frieda P]

I'm not sure what to say for this one....sheer amazement, it seeps into the spirit and settles in after the read. Magnifico Eli!! xo

Ah thank you so much lovely sister! I wasn't sure too, where this one could bring me... but I followed my pen... ;) xoxo till soon lovely!

[PurpleQuartz]

This is probably one of my favorites. It has that really beautiful spark that glows brighter when you read it. Truly lovely Elisa.

Hi dear friend, thank you so much for being here, I popped in in between my hectical schedule, and your words always surprise me... :) hope you have a lovely day/night till soon! x

[PurpleQuartz]

Thank you :)
I hope you have a glorious day/night too! Till next time!

[Eddie Phillips]

I loved the aesthetic beauty of your words. I loved this piece.

Hi Eddie, thank you so so much :) will check more of you in time, so grateful to you x

[Eddie Phillips]

Thank you for the beauty in your writing

:) you're sweet, many thank yous again! I will not forget you.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Beautifully written... the texture and richness of the imagery and wording is fantastic. Good work!

Thank you dearest friend, I'm so sorry I lack of time, will come back soon for you, but thank you dearly for your encouriging words on this. This was somehow a out of a body write, and very personal. xxx

[quinfinn]

inter dimensional travel or transcendental meditation....it boggles the mind....felt like an out of body experience to me, weird but wonderful. you have a strange gift. i love it.

I love your words my friend, thank you for feeling me out of my body, you did...... you're a treasure!

[quinfinn]

as are you, dear friend...you're welcome

Thank you so deeply, come back for you :) always! xo

[quinfinn]

i know.....;)

That is most important to me ;) trust of friends thank you dearly! :)

[quinfinn]

you have always been true to your word

:) makes me smile, so are you friend !!!

[quinfinn]

;)