~ Highway of Dreams

~ Highway of Dreams, Elisa Laura, E.L. Fantasy, There...

~ Highway of Dreams

 

On her knees she felt the soil,

The light and soft drops as 

Transparent worlds her wet skin.

 

Thousands of  little crystals

Reflected the early moon’s shimmer

She was arrived in his dream...

 

Now there he stood, upon the stream,

" Come take my hand "

His low strong voice whispered...

 

He sounded calm, and pleasant

The way he looked at her, made her heart sing

And believe in his trustful manners

 

She took his hand, and climbed

Upon the edge of these two delightful

Elements of this place, filled with magic

 

With the passion of curiosity,

And fire sparks in her heart,

She gave herself over to his land

 

With twilight in the air, and the whirl of leaves,

She looked upon his white elves hair,

As he smiled, and said, "You are safe here"

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

 

Author's Note

Do what you must ;)
Thank you xx

Reviews

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

You are a siren of poetry dear soul! I have walked in your palace many times before..listening...lingering..soaking in the hues of light and dark...passions and tears. I was afraid that if I made a noise..it might fade away like a dream. I am confident now that it is you I hear singing by the water! Thank you for sharing your beauty.It has brightened my soul and led me back to a home that is growing green again with life.

Thank yo so much for this most stunning review.... :) so happy you're here in my Second World. ;) you have rich feelers, and a great reviewing skills. I shall come by soon for you!

[ashesonfire]

Oh very nice! Extremely beautiful my dear! Love the fantasy elements here, and the image in my mind of the moonlight and the sand. You definitely pulled me into that world with your descriptions :D

Thank you so much for the wonderful words, Elisa. :)

[ashesonfire]

You are very welcome!

.............. :)

[joshua deathdealer]

You haven't skipped a beat. lol This is awesome. It really is. Love the emotional imagery.

Aah Joshua, great you're back! I shall come over soon to you dear friend. Thanks for saying so, :) makes me strong, and to continue on WC.... for I had/have my doubts.... :))

[joshua deathdealer]

You welcome. Absolutely. Stay. I'm back for good and I'd like to see this place popping again. xx

I'm trying lovely friend... I try so hard to stay, but it's not easy... You crack me up though! :) always! much love xx

[Clockwork]

This is the sort of persona I see the the Gold Man having. This also has a similarly epic and classic feel to it, just like that poem. I enjoyed the detail about the transparent worlds on her skin. The idea of safety in the end was also a good one. I imagined the forest of Lothlorien when the company is welcomed into that woodland kingdom and protected from harm.

Ah you have feelers my friend, thank you for saying all this ;-) " a flower out of a dream" smiling... there is only peace and love there... you have sharp eyes, and analysis! :) happy you came by my friend.

[Clockwork]

You're welcome. Glad I could walk in another stretch of woods for a change :-)

That makes me happy :-) there is much to hike through my writes I know lol.... hehe so glad you enjoyed!

[Jack...]

So very beautiful are your words once again my dear friend. Enchanting and magical feelings flow softly about my mind as I read. There is a certain peace as well that frames this piece. For in these dreams love does begin and bloom in fragrance and beauty. I loved this.

Thank you very much dear friend, for your time and visit :)

[Sugar Plum ♥]

very beautiful poem of fantasy, dreamland, love, passion, expressed so nicely with the red color and music! amazing feeling, really peaceful and calm, seems she was in love :)

{nia}

Thank you nia, I'm happy you like this one :)

[Sleeping Maiden]

Ooooo i really enjoyed this. It's as if one has escaped and entered that dream place where nothing could ever be bad!! I love it... i love the way you described this. Just wonderful! I miss reading your work..
Joyful read!! = D

Thank you dear, oh so good to see you again! hope all is well with you! :) lovely review!

[Sleeping Maiden]

Thanks too! ha yeah i miss writerscafe sooooo sooo much! I've just been so busy with college. >.< read moreThanks too! ha yeah i miss writerscafe sooooo sooo much! I've just been so busy with college. >.<
It's so hectic! = o It's my 4th year too! But i hope to write more when i can...

I miss everyone... and reading poetry again.. = D

[Sleeping Maiden]

hmm huh.. my response changed! blah. I mean im in my 4th year of college right now..so it's a bit hectic. but i hope to write again! I miss everyone!

I know you're so busy with college, dear, and all goes hopefully well. :) I'm just returned either after two months break on here. Good to catch up with you even if it's briefly! :)

[Sleeping Maiden]

Thanks. i hope it does! I am graduating next year. But.. i am planning on going into med school.. so i'm gonna be in school for a long time ha ha. i hope i can do it! Ohh? Really? you went on a break? Ahh i see. I'm glad you are here again then! Welcome back too!

Wow, really cool you choose that direction... I love it! ;) you can do it, for you are a strong, and intelligent young woman. You will see when you did it after years, it was worth it! thank you very much, you too welcome back :D

[Sleeping Maiden]

really? you think so? hmmm... well honestly its what my parents want me to go into. ha ha. And I wanted to please them. Though i do like an area in medicine.. and hopefully i can help.
Thank you for encouraging me!

[David Scott]

Wonderful expression of finding a "home" for your love.
I'm not sure changing the tense from "I" to "she" works for me.
Unless you intend to show that "I" is lost and now you find yourself looking from the outside in at the love your are blissfully lost in.
The last two stanza read as if a third person is looking in on the scene you were describing earlier.
I felt the wonderland your heart found in the write.

Thank you so much David. Your words are appreciated... :)

[OBWhiteHawk]

Incredible poem, I was brought here by the great name you choose. I stayed to read the crystal writing and listen to the song you picked to go with it. It all fits together and is beautiful .

Thank you very much :)

[h d e rushin]

.... and we are safe with you among us dear EL. I have to thank you each night
for your inspiration and your song.
dana

Lovely friend, just now I felt very sad, and you really crack me up... So glad you feel safe with me, (It's all I'm caring for, to let you guys feel safe...) Hugs, and love, Eli x