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~ Like some Wild Roses

~ Like some Wild Roses

A Poem by
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Today's poetry, out of the soul

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~ Like some Wild Roses

Today, I looked at your many faces;

They hung as love under the perfect sky,

 

I swoon like a lover in silence,

For you and me are there

 

Beneath the Wild Roses 

We become, the grass, the sand

The unconditional love,

 

With thorns around our stems,

We are entangled, as

We bleed into one.

 

But suddenly there were voices;

Calling me back, 

So I did prepare the BBQ.

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

© 2013


Author's Note

Photo made by me today,
Enter a dreamers mind ;)

Enjoy! x




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Daydreamish and full of happiness, not a single unpleasant care in the world is present here. How you can go from the most gorgeous and happy poetry to the darkest and most solemn with ease eludes me... My mind dwells no lit corridors. I think, that for a vacation i would like to visit your mind, and explore the world in your eyes and imagination.
The bbq part just jumped out of nowhere and made me smile. It was so random. lalalalala, look at the pretty flowers..... BBQ BABY!!!!!! :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

LOL my sweetheart, and bestie, how do I miss your reviews :) you are the only one who understands th.. read more



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Daydreamish and full of happiness, not a single unpleasant care in the world is present here. How you can go from the most gorgeous and happy poetry to the darkest and most solemn with ease eludes me... My mind dwells no lit corridors. I think, that for a vacation i would like to visit your mind, and explore the world in your eyes and imagination.
The bbq part just jumped out of nowhere and made me smile. It was so random. lalalalala, look at the pretty flowers..... BBQ BABY!!!!!! :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

LOL my sweetheart, and bestie, how do I miss your reviews :) you are the only one who understands th.. read more
Your poetry is quite ethereal. You capture moments as if they are fireflies floating in a bottle.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thankies dear, you know I've thought about that too? catching wasps in syrup filled empty bottles .... read more
Kenneth The Poet

10 Years Ago

Will do. Will do.

10 Years Ago

Me too, I need a sleep, too many night shifts had sucked on the Eli... back in full track soon frie.. read more
It all came together so beautifully.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you kindly :)
Ahh, I see you are a dreamer, Eli. So am I:) The ending was superb and reading this was a pleasant start to my day. Oh, and the video was beautiful as well:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rebecca Buller

10 Years Ago

You're very welcome, my friend:-)

10 Years Ago

You're a beautiful writer, in 5-7-5's I'm your fan, coming back soon for you x
Rebecca Buller

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Eli. That's so sweet. And I absolutely love your poetry. It's like a glass of fine wine. .. read more
haha... the ending... awakening from a fantastic dream of lovers in a garden, intertwined like the roots in the soil beneath these beautiful roses... and loving the roses... being the roses... you are a gardener I see, and definitely a dreamer... i loved the imagery in this dear Elisa.
xx Horizon

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

*remember, again I have to say here, long nails, a keypad with rusty letters on it, by typing too mu.. read more
Horizon K.

10 Years Ago

haha... you're too funny sis... love you xoxo

10 Years Ago

Ha lol, it's our Indo blood for sure, cium dari belanda sis... sleep well xoxo, love you tons! post .. read more
Funny how the hot BBQ was actually the cold water splashed across your face in this one...such a serene and almost spiritual scene you paint....and then quickly remind us that, no matter the heights, reality is always just around the corner....

On the last line, I"d drop "did" or change "prepared" to "prepare"...just to make sure everything is on the up and up, grammatically ;)

love it!
CM

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Haha yeah CM well said.... it was a refreshing call LOL... I only can wish it is... ;) Thanks for he.. read more
Oh, the photo of the roses is absolutely divine!! And a lovely poem to accompany it!! Both have entered my dreamer's mind, and soothe my soul!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Oh dear, so sorry to hear that love, in mine too, I will private message you soon! I felt most guilt.. read more

10 Years Ago

*which maybe... I wrote to spontaneously
Sheila Kline

10 Years Ago

Oh, I have never lost faith in you my dear friend......you are never to spontaneously!!
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AC
very beautiful! felt like i was there

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

And that's what it's all about, thank you dearly for your time and visit x
A beautiful little snapshot of life, my friend. I love the sublime beauty of becoming a flower and then suddenly getting called back to the BBQ...because this is how I too lose myself sometimes. I will be doing something and suddenly I'm someplace completely different before I'm called back to reality. So pretty, my friend.

Suggestion: "I swoon like a lover in silence" instead of "in silent" or "I swoon like a silent lover"

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Ah girly thanks for the help yes, you're right! I will change it. :) happy with you. Thank you so mu.. read more
Girl Friday (Sarah W.)

10 Years Ago

No problem...beautifully done.
The imagination can take us anywhere we chose to go. We can drift slowly into a world all our own within a crowded room brimming with people. Serenity in the middle of the day.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Exactly dear, thank you for your wonderful words.
Poetic Beauty

10 Years Ago

You are more than welcome. Thank you for taking me on a brief journey into your imagination

10 Years Ago

Thank you for saying that, I'm really pleased I could dear.

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