~ Like some Wild Roses

Today's poetry, out of the soul

 

~ Like some Wild Roses

Today, I looked at your many faces;

They hung as love under the perfect sky,

 

I swoon like a lover in silence,

For you and me are there

 

Beneath the Wild Roses 

We become, the grass, the sand

The unconditional love,

 

With thorns around our stems,

We are entangled, as

We bleed into one.

 

But suddenly there were voices;

Calling me back, 

So I did prepare the BBQ.

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Photo made by me today,
Enter a dreamers mind ;)

Enjoy! x

Reviews

[RedInk524]

Daydreamish and full of happiness, not a single unpleasant care in the world is present here. How you can go from the most gorgeous and happy poetry to the darkest and most solemn with ease eludes me... My mind dwells no lit corridors. I think, that for a vacation i would like to visit your mind, and explore the world in your eyes and imagination.
The bbq part just jumped out of nowhere and made me smile. It was so random. lalalalala, look at the pretty flowers..... BBQ BABY!!!!!! :D

LOL my sweetheart, and bestie, how do I miss your reviews :) you are the only one who understands this silly goose. :) You may always take a brief vacation in my head. I have reserved a seat especially for you! :) Let's eat!!!!!!!! :P

[icelandicblue]

Surreal until reality beckons. I love the beauty and the amusing twist at the end. You always write such interesting pieces.

Thank you very much :)

[sharonlee]

Gorgeous photos to accompany a poignant write...

Thank you so much darling...

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Nature has a way of submitting us into the entanglement of the moment... hypnotizing the eye of the beholder...
Summertime is like that...stunning beauty comes in many forms, whether it's "the perfect sky" or "wild roses". I enjoyed the atmosphere you have painted in this piece. A lovely write, Eli! XXXX :)

Flower Powerrrr Sis, lol, Thanks so much luv xxx

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful photo and amazing description.
"Beneath the Wild Roses
We become, the grass, the sand
The unconditional love,"
Great vision by your description and I like the ending. Some places are more alive with beauty and can steal our thoughts and vision. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Thank you my friend, I appreciate you.

[wunder]

~of coarse-no problem~always~

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the mundane interruption to the wonderful trance...love is both roses and reality!

really nice write,

jacob

Exactly exactly you got the vibe.... :) thanks so much for the kind words jacob! :)

[Corset]

lol, i love the way this ended, it's all dreamy and then you get snapped back into reality and backyard grills, just wonderful Ellie with a twist of humor!

Thank you so much dear x *smile*

[Corset]

x my pleasure, sweetie X

Muah!!!! x be back soon for you :D

[Pax]

those flowers are really beautiful, so as you words big sis... the ending line made me think of the summer BBQ outside, enjoying the nature warmth and beauty.... taking the time to feel each love one closer to home(our hearts)... family time is never more fun outside in a beautiful weather ;)... Great work!

Thank you brother love.... You always crack me up with your thoughts, miss you, hope you feel a bit better, take all the time to recover xxx

[Pax]

i am recovering... thank you, i miss you too that is why i am here... and your welcome...

I'm so glad to hear that... you're sweet my dear bro, thanks for all, I wanted to review you tonight, but you left your pieces, they will come back when time is right I know... :) always loving you take care and till soon! x

[Pax]

i wish i could write... i think i have lost my voice in writing.... but the voices in my head are still there... it's just that i could not write them in words since the start my allergies got worst... i am recovering the best i can- coz we need to be strong... and you too big sis...be strong :)

I'm strong when you're strong lovely one... and when you're not I'm sending the wings... remember? :) hugging you and a squeeze to feel better, take all the time love. We are awaiting you, in good and fit shape, for we understand how you feel really... x

[Jack...]

Forgot the rating score...entered now.

Aw thanks my friend, (but that is for me not most important, I appreciate you very much though) :)