~ I know we love Green

~ I know we love Green

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~ I know we love Green E.L. Elisa Laura, the state of being total off the world, of feeling love, and being sick... of love, sick and tired of being sick and tired....

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~ I know we love Green

 


Through my window pane, this morning,

I saw a little bird resting on the

Branch of my giant

Oak Tree in front of my house;

 

It must have been you, resting

From a long trip, gasping for some air,

Talking to the morning magpies,

And reaching for me as my day clock

Has passed for days, into nightly slumbers;

 

Half fuzzy I wake, and see you there,

Reaching me, but my head is too numb;

Too tired, of all I’ve been through,

I can’t even turn from right to left,

So I speak to you in my dreams…


 

-          ~  Elisa Laura

© 2013


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Oh yeh, feel free... I do not care, if I get reviews or not really...
Just enjoy xx I'll be back when I feel so.

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Following out of sight, flitting in at the edges of perception, the Cheshire cat disappearing among the trees and materialising when the chaos plaguing Alice is most thick. Is that Fate I see in the distance? Or is it the echoes of the past come back to visit?
Such a personal and poignant poem, Elisa. Incredible. :) xx

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

there is more, but you got it all safe, and privately xx ;)
Matt Sayer

7 Years Ago

lol Gremlins again :) xxx

7 Years Ago

LOL, I think I want to Gizmo you right now! haha xxxx ;)



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I missed you. And I did see a hummingbird this morning in my garden of gladiolus. Nicely written
my friend...dana

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Oh dear dana, thank you so much... it's a wonder you saw one... I can only dream of them, for they l.. read more
h d e rushin

7 Years Ago

I didn't know what it was at first with my eyesight being what it is.. But the potential and the
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7 Years Ago

It's truly magical... when I visit the states, I will bring my binocular, and will spot many birds w.. read more
Can't tell the birds from the blossoms..xoxo

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your fantastic comment my dear. xo
Following out of sight, flitting in at the edges of perception, the Cheshire cat disappearing among the trees and materialising when the chaos plaguing Alice is most thick. Is that Fate I see in the distance? Or is it the echoes of the past come back to visit?
Such a personal and poignant poem, Elisa. Incredible. :) xx

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

there is more, but you got it all safe, and privately xx ;)
Matt Sayer

7 Years Ago

lol Gremlins again :) xxx

7 Years Ago

LOL, I think I want to Gizmo you right now! haha xxxx ;)
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Nostalgic and painful, painting emotions with excellent Word selection. Well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you dearly my friend. So good to see you again!
This is very sweet Elisa, love it. Always love your writes, you make it all look so easy. 100

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much G. I truly appreciate your time and visit. I'll be around more after my holidays.... read more
Yes, I often feel that nature speaks to us. So often one sees something in the natural world that seems significant to us. I hope the lady in the poem finds comfort in her dreams and can move on. Liked the music as well.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much Astri, for your time, and beautiful words... I'm glad you saw this in my little .. read more
I absolutely love this there are so manythings going though my mind but i dont even know how to put them in the form of a review... other then completly beautiful and breathe taking i love it

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Kelsey love! x
Lover Of Words

7 Years Ago

You are VERY welcome :)
My promises are late, but they are sincere. I read this last week and truly wanted to share my thoughts on this. This made me feel so damn melancholy....the waking world is just too much some days. How unfortunate it is to rather dream than live. Despite feeling blue I found your magpie to be truly enchanting. I wish you strength, health, and happiness.

I'm so glad you have your poetry to speak for you. xo

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you love, and you know, even when we don't speak for a time, it's always good between us, I tr.. read more
Muse

7 Years Ago

I may be quiet...or in stealth mode "but I'm always around." ;)

7 Years Ago

I know, you know, we know LOL.... :) we are silent waters.... but we see all! :P
What a sweetness of loving words wrapped in something very personal, Elisa. The colour of your bird is special, tis Nature's own hue, is complex yet beautifully everywhere - as is love for another person.
'So I speak to you in my dreams…' - that's what dreams are for. (You, wishing you well)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you m'dear, b-day twin. :) So good to hear from you, and I'm truly sorry, I didn't come over y.. read more

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