~ I know we love Green

~ I know we love Green E.L. Elisa Laura, the state of being total off the world, of feeling love, and being sick... of love, sick and tired of being sick and tired....

~ I know we love Green

 

Through my window pane, this morning,

I saw a little bird resting on the

Branch of my giant

Oak Tree in front of my house;

 

It must have been you, resting

From a long trip, gasping for some air,

Talking to the morning magpies,

And reaching for me as my day clock

Has passed for days, into nightly slumbers;

 

Half fuzzy I wake, and see you there,

Reaching me, but my head is too numb;

Too tired, of all I’ve been through,

I can’t even turn from right to left,

So I speak to you in my dreams…

 

-          ~  Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Oh yeh, feel free... I do not care, if I get reviews or not really...
Just enjoy xx I'll be back when I feel so.

Reviews

[Matt Sayer]

Following out of sight, flitting in at the edges of perception, the Cheshire cat disappearing among the trees and materialising when the chaos plaguing Alice is most thick. Is that Fate I see in the distance? Or is it the echoes of the past come back to visit?
Such a personal and poignant poem, Elisa. Incredible. :) xx

Goodmorning from a windy Netherlands, sweetie... thank you so much. You feel my heart... it seems you have your hands on my heartstrings, and play me sweet music.

Goodmorning from a windy Netherlands, sweetie... thank you so much. You feel my heart... it seems you have your hands on my heartstrings, and play me sweet music.

there is more, but you got it all safe, and privately xx ;)

[Matt Sayer]

lol Gremlins again :) xxx

LOL, I think I want to Gizmo you right now! haha xxxx ;)

[Pax]

Many, many, many hugs! ~ I hope you feel better big sis... being sick and not being able to do much, is frustrating at times... dreams and fantasy are our only refuge to a hard life... dream well and write more...

Treu!! Many hugs too, thanks for the love... X

[Pax]

family cares... please be well...

You're so sweet for me, I'm getting there :) hugs!!! sweetie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

what great imagination...love the personification of the bird into the lover...travelling so far to be with her...and then she wakes, and the bird is not there...but what a nice dream

love this

jacob

Thank you dear for your powerful interpretation, words, and thoughts on this one... :) it's lovely to see how it get's interpret... :D I'm reading all yours in the meantime till I'm recovered... you write fantastic friend. Until then, Elisa thank you!

[Corset]

Elisa, dear Sherpa, what a beautiful poem you have written, I love the green, green is life and fresh beginnings, like spring, I love this poem! be well , I am sorry to hear you are feeling poorly again :(

Thank you love, and my fellow Sherpa... I am happy you enjoyed this one dear.... xx

[Corset]

XX thank youXX

I mailed you xxx and you're welcome!! Muwah!

[Jack...]

This is so you Elisa. It is soft and tender, beautiful and loving and just carefree enough to bring a smile to my face. This, I can tell, came from somewhere deep inside. I do wish you a quick recovery for your smile is truly missed here.

Thank you so much Jack, my dear, I can't thank you enough, also for your mail... :) with friends like you, who respect me, in good and bad, and give the right help, (with that I mean, I love my privacy). ;) Miss you all guys, I'm getting there slowly! xx

[lost girl]

WOW WOW WOW! so many connections we make in this world...touching dreams when we are unaware. i always come here to find solace from the screaming of the planet. THIS is why you are here. This is where you belong. I know it selfish that I say that hidden here in the pages of never never but you are such a treasure!Blessings Dear one! Your serenity calms my heart.

Thank you my sweet friend... for your heartfelt words here upon my poem. Very appreciated! be back soon for you xx

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I see the migration of a bird coming back... of course this is personification... and then the ordeal layouts in the rest... A bit different of a read... had you not given us some feedback... before engaging in this verse...

Thank you so much Glen, this is a personal piece, I think only the most very close ones will get... so I don't blame you at all, one day I will explain it to you better, when I'm feeling better, and I do like it to keep my pieces a little bit mysterious, for if you say all it won't let imagine and think the other upcomming readers anymore... I am grateful for your review though, thanks a lot.

[Horizon K.]

Gorgeous natural expression Elisa, transmitting this state of being to me so profoundly, your own kind of bell jar... Seeing dreams in this exhausted and hazed state of lost between night and day, looking between the ethereal layers of the visitors that stop by in green. Rest well my dear... I miss you and hope to see you recovered and back here soon...
xoxo Horizon

Thank you my sweet Sis, what am I without you? :) your kindred heart is always right on the spot, and I'm getting there, it just takes me some time, I will mail you soon my e-mail... I miss you too! thanks for being my fuel in these days....xxxx

[Horizon K.]

Oh love, no need to rush for me, take good care of yourself, but yes please send me your email... I would love to be in touch with you that way:)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Oh, the beauty in this one, my dear friend... I feel the emotion right to the tips of my toes and fingers. I love the melancholy aspect of staring out of the window to see a little bird that is the bird of possibility, and yet that is all that it is, because this love can only be found in dreams. A journey, a catharsis, an expedition of the heart...beautiful.

I'm happy you felt this one so deeply my dear, for it was a honest, and heartfelt one... I like your take on it. You always know me well ;) xx miss you and till soon!

[Clockwork]

I love the picture of the humming bird you chose for this piece. I am also really fond of of your second stanza, and the lines where it talks about the other person returning from that long journey. I've also had experiences like the last three lines of your third stanza. Those instances are truly draining and heart-breaking. Well written my friend!

P.S: One small thing: I think you could remove the words "On a" from the third line of stanza one. I think that would clean of the rhythm of those lines a bit.

Thank you dear friend for your lovely review, you hit me in a serene moment of not having my mind clear lol, no alertness, at all but pure feeling.... and I am grateful for your honest improve to me ... on your advice I can build, grow and it always touches me deeply when you come by, I thank you for helping this little lost Dutchie lol... hugs C.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the photo and the poetry was amazing. I like the thoughts in the poem. Sometime in sweet dreams we must seek the beauty missed. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Thank you luv, come soon by for you my bestie!