~ In Love

~ In Love

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~ In Love, E.L. Writes from my travel, (all alone)... Portugal, love, aware, here, now, me...

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~ In Love

 


 

Every night, I look again

       Into the freckled sky,

             I think I shall never heal;

      Of being in love so deeply,

Surrounded by your love,

      And the sparkles of mist

            You spray softly on my skin,

      Yet, I remember; I was only

And alone, dreaming

      The sky high, in Portugal,

             And I must move on. Yes.

      Even though I will come

Back to you every night,

      So we can sleep together.

             As we do dream together

A skyline of our own...





 

             09/04/2013

           ~ Elisa Laura

© 2013


Author's Note



I'm traveling, writing, living and loving... :)
Be back soon on full signal... wifi, reach, and reviews, catching up,
In between my holliday's.
Enjoy! xx

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I am in awe of your talent. Your words bloom on the page like morning glories at dawn's first light. Your fingertips are love and they spread deep affection to all who read. Each verse is as a soft woolen blanket wrapping me tighty and keeping me warm. More beautiful a poem would be hard to find. Loved this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you my friend, this one, was one from out of beautiful Portugal.... :) you always make my day .. read more



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This is so beautiful and sad. To visit only the one we love in our sleep. Your poetry is always so perfectly breathless and that last stanza put a tear in my eye. Sigh

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Anne, I'm glad you enjoyed this travel write of me.... (hugs)
This is purely beautiful. I really enjoyed reading it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much... another exciting road trip it was.... of me :D
This is very romantic and full of love. Sometimes, every little bit counts when we fall in love. Even absence. You have the heart of a real poet.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you kindly for your wonderful comment, alterego... I think you have one too! :)
I am in awe of your talent. Your words bloom on the page like morning glories at dawn's first light. Your fingertips are love and they spread deep affection to all who read. Each verse is as a soft woolen blanket wrapping me tighty and keeping me warm. More beautiful a poem would be hard to find. Loved this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you my friend, this one, was one from out of beautiful Portugal.... :) you always make my day .. read more
Quite the scenic read, this one...I thoroughly enjoyed it,

thanks for the share

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your time, and review Antonyo, truly appreciated... I've been off for long, but planni.. read more
Antoñyo

10 Years Ago

Not a prob, take your time!

10 Years Ago

♥ thank you for the extra time! ;)
Awww, I see myself on this poem. It's like listening to my own heartbeat. This is very romantic yet heart wrenching piece. My fave from you, lovely one.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Sweetie, I so missed you, thanks a bunch from here, safe home but not happy at all. I try to listen .. read more
Wow Elisa. This is something else. You have pulled me In yet again. Not only is this amazing but you have seemed to pull at my own heart strings and emotional breaks within in the world of what we call first love. I love ur words my dear.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lover Of Words

10 Years Ago

My life long mission is always to live and love with all my soul. I will be just fine.

10 Years Ago

I think you're more strong than me sometimes..... xx
Lover Of Words

10 Years Ago

Oh love you are just as strong. Trust me I've had my hardships these last few weeks.
A skyline of our own..... Takes my breath away..

This reads like one of my dreams ... soft.. lovely ..

Beautiful, with heart, and longIng ..

Jasmine Xx ♥♥♥♥♥

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Indeed... when we travel, the sky is ours... the stars I count each and every night, and think of my.. read more
J. J.  Nightingale

10 Years Ago

xxxxx ♥♥♥♥♥
oh this is beautiful..the longing...nd nice pic...fits with the poem :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much for this nice review! :)
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Pax
Love such as these.... I'll always knew that you'll be on the right place big sis... no matter where you are, the love of that special someone remains a home in your heart... a blooming piece!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much sweety x

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