~ Embrace the Void

~ Embrace the Void, Elisa Laura, E.L. It must be the time...

~ Embrace the Void

 

 

Hear, hear the melody;

Where we dance softly with our

Barren feet, and touch the clouds

With our toes; hear the rhythm,

The swirling air which flows...

 

Love the emptiness, I scream with,

Circling around you, eyes to yours,

Euphoria connected, no sound; no voice…

 

Be a witness of the wings, that grow;

Slowly from out of my back,

While  I dance around you, and

Let go, all the pain;

 

A back that had carried to much weight,

Scars of the backpack, on my shoulders,

Scars of too much fate;

 

Even scars under my feet, for walking

Days, and nights, to this final date…

 

On this cloud, I shall drift further,

For I’m so ever tired now;

Let me rest my head upon it,

 

Sleep, and dream, forever more;

And be united with my spirit,

Let me walk on my Andalucian shore

 

I hear the voices, of utopia

Softly on my flight,

We play the harp, we touch it,

As pure transforming light…

 

 

Embrace my void,

For I embrace yours.

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

I'm just human, I'm not immortal...

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

So hold your head up high and know
It's not the end of the road
Walk down this beaten path before
You pack your things and head home
At the end of the road
You'll find what you've been longing for
You'll find what you've been longing for at the end of the road
I know 'cause my feet have the scars to show
I was lost with vague direction and no place to call home...

Yeah!
It's time for you to press on
This is not your war
Set your sights,
Set your sights to North
Press on, press on
This is not your escape,
This is not your escape
Wash away what they thought of you
Lock your sights, press on
'Cause in this place we're all as good as dead
...end cycle, press on
Behind the mask you'll find yourself alone
It's not the end of the road,
the end of the road for you

At the end of the road
You'll find what you've been longing for - underoath

Thank you for the beautiful Lyrics my friend... :) I enjoyed reading them.

[Lydia Shutter]

An angel letting go of her pain, dancing her cares away....ah, this poem is absolutely magical and the harp music is mesmerizing! A deeply romantic highly emotive write. Gorgeous! Lydi**

Thank you "met heel mijn hart" beautiful words.... kus en knuffel x

[J. J. Nightingale]

I don't know what to say .. Your words combined with this music... awwww
You always take me away to someplace no one knows of-

On this cloud, I shall drift further,

For I’m so ever tired now;

Let me rest my head upon it,


Sleep, and dream, forever more;

And be united with my spirit,

Let me walk on my Andalucian shore

I hear the voices, of utopia

Softly on my flight,

We play the harp, we touch it,

As pure transforming light…


I don't think you realize how amazing you are !
There is pain here.. but there is also love .. rebirth .. a journey that never ends...
As Robbie wrote ... Breathtaking !!

Special... Love, Jasmine xooxo

Sigh, thank you my love. I so miss you, but I'm low too low to do anything brightful right now and also on WC ... your review gave me tears into my eyes... thank you Bella donna, for always brighten my day. I love you ♥ and be back when I feel better, sorry.... xxx (((HUGS))) You're special too, you have no idea. You''re one of my favs of the whole place here.

[J. J. Nightingale]

I will love you always My Little Dove .. because your heart is pure.. and you know the power of forever... the spirit goes on long after we lose this mortal coil .. .. Be well.. come home to us.. You are loved .... Jasmine

Your friendship, love and trust in me, means the world... sometimes we can't just anymore... we can't. It's for so many years I've written... I'm so tired. I hope something to amuse me will fill my spirit soon, to keep on writing... but for now I've lost it a bit... And I shall love you too forever, I know we have this special bond, you're like a sweet mother to me Jazz, a soulmate, and friend in one. Love you sweetie, I do my best... to be in track, :) xx

[J. J. Nightingale]

Forever ♥♥

Forever Jazz!!! Para Siempre Linda... :) ♥

[J. J. Nightingale]

No me siento bien... No sé cómo será mañana... Pero sé, que te amo... pequeñita... ♥♥

Lo siento en mi corazón desde hace mucho tiempo, que no se siente bien, querida, pero tú eres fuerte ...

me gusta, sé que no tenemos miedo, cuando es nuestro tiempo... :))) ♥♥ te amo tambien! muchos!

[J. J. Nightingale]

No seas un poco triste... Debemos ser valientes... Te amo, siempre... Buenas noches.. ♥♥

No lo haré, porque yo sé cómo es hermoso el otro lado es ... y pure tu! :) buenas noches Mi cariñita besitos! x

[Pax]

I feel sad re-reading this, I have read it before and read it now, I still felt the void of sadness that swallow us in whole, yes, we are not immortal, we live for today, and we make the best of it, like everyday is a bright new day, always new, always fresh...

sometimes this void of emptiness, out-runs us, and overwhelms us to the point of screaming in the stillness... you know i am tired too big sis, but like you said to me, live for 300% and so I will, be inspiring as you'll be, be bless, be well as well... hugs!

Thank you for coming back on this one, brother, and to listen.... Thank you for the 300% always, forgive me, I'm in a bad state... your words are healing ones. :) I have reached a point, though, I need to re-load, and maybe for long... time will say. But you know how to contact me. Hugs xx

[Robbie~xoxo~]

"On this cloud, I shall drift further,

For I’m so ever tired now;

Let me rest my head upon it,



Sleep, and dream, forever more;

And be united with my spirit,

Let me walk on my Andalucian shore



I hear the voices, of utopia

Softly on my flight,

We play the harp, we touch it,

As pure transforming light…~ This leaves me awestruck... there are no words that can convey the sadness I felt as I read this...
Within this white light, there is a love so Pure... untouchable...unforgettable...

You write like none other.. Your work of art sings of you pain...
The beauty of this pain is a rebirth in your words, that nobody can duplicate...

This is breathtaking!~xoxo~

Thank you love.... there is death, and rebirth, always. On every experience of life, and we shall overcome the hurt. We are strong women. I try to be as much honest, and straight to the heart, as I can. It could be fictive, but mostly it's a mix of course. For nobody ever can hide truly in fictive matters... not even the best authors, or film producers, there is always an "Oculair" of seeing things, and it's individually beautiful, like Books, can be made to movies, but it shall be different by any other who has the leading ;) xx love you!

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Ah, but you are immortal dear friend for it takes a thousand lifetimes to become as beautiful and serene as your soul is. You have waited here for decades crafting your light so that you may sprinkle each of us with your essence..You who are a true Goddess!

Sigh, thank you Queenie for your ever so tender heart and soul, I think I've met you before to be honest... ;) xx

[Jack...]

So melodically beautiful my friend. Your poetic words are always music for my heart. Lovely, Elisa.

Jack dear, you always lift me up, and I can't wait to find my spirit fully back to be there for you my friend... I thank you with whole my heart. Eli

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like how this moves...and the idea of combining his void with her void, and perhaps there will be gaps filled if that happens...perhaps from nothing can come something.

eloquently written...

jacob

It's the way of life, and the tenderness of all that moves... as we do~ thank you dear friend, be back soon, I need to get my strength back.

[Corset]

This leaves me feeling sad that you aren't immortal, but we are all just humans with human frailties and faults, dreams and desires. If you were immortal what would you do with all that time? I wonder would we appreciate the beauty of a harp song quite as much. Beautiful write Ellie.

Thank you R. Love you hun! for, you're right, I rather be mortal, than I should forever yearn for the Lyre, LOL xx

[Lover Of Words]

This is really deep... i really enjoyed your ability to pull me in as the reader this is very beautiful beyond words... Deep write my friend :)

Much love sweet one, I hope you're fine love. I think of you and love you always!x

[Lover Of Words]

Your very welcome love

I shall be as soon as I can back for you sweety, and HAPPY BIRTHDAY !!!!!!!!!!

[Lover Of Words]

Appreciate you dear