~ A Thousand Years

~ A Thousand Years

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~ A Thousand Years, E.L. Elisa Laura, A Thousand Years, Keys, Love, Relationships, Trust, Feelings, Ancient, Me, You, Us, We.

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~ A Thousand Years

 

Through the ages,

Your soul embraced me,

 

Where dark nights never

Seemed to finish,

 

The pain in my chest,

And it's infinity,

 

Days we traveled, without effect,

I have seen pain,

            And have slain,

So did you...

 

I have waited, and slept for years,

 

Now the world is barren and desolate,

             I perish with hunger,

 

But beauty arises,

If life exists,

 

Where I hope to find you…


 

 ~ Elisa Laura

© 2013


Author's Note



Music: Lyriel - Autumntales

Enjoy the "details"... xx

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Filled with hope for something better after leaving this world. Who really knows? Some believe what they learn in church or synagogue. Others are not so certain. Have we lived before and were we with our one true soulmate in that life too? Perhaps. Maybe that is why we are drawn to one particular person in this life. Who really knows? Lots to ponder here, that's for sure. Beautifully written, Elisa. Knuffels, Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Ah I love what you got out of my little write... thanks so much for pondering on this one, beautiful.. read more



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I thousand ways to hope of many great hopeful things in life i am so blessed to be able to read your beautiful words everyday this is most beautiful!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much Kelsey always.... :)
Lover Of Words

7 Years Ago

My pleasure sweet love
I like the eternity of this poem, and the desperation in between!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Starchance.... thank you for reading.
Sad....I hate feeling this way.
A very good job Elisa
I could taste every syllable.

Scott

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you Scott dear, a lot is so sad lately, I know..... but know my friend, out of pain comes beau.. read more
Scott Metro

7 Years Ago

Kiss...hug...:)

7 Years Ago

Many hugs friend..... you will know when I'm back I will support fully! miss your writings! xo
good work :) love the deepness of this and such beautiful flow keep it up :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carl Drake Barnard

7 Years Ago

plesier lief Hehe it's afrikaans for thanks love :)

7 Years Ago

Dankie skattie en versta jou :)

7 Years Ago

* ek versta jou
The name and picture of this write attracted me to click on it. Glad I did! The way it starts with such deep pain and anguish and then how those last few lines suddenly gain a sense of hope! With the perfect words ''But beauty arises.' Purely amazing! It shows that even in the worst places there's always hope.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much love, to feel my fantasy writings... it's truly a great joy to read your words, ea.. read more
So I just finished this and I have to say wow... I really liked this... And I think in every ones life we have all lived this... Been in love with someone but the feeling wasn't returned... We wait and wait for them to open their eyes but it seems they never do... But when they finally realize what was there in front of them the whole time it's too late... Already with a new love in your life their time has expired... I really can't wait to read more of work.. And sorry it has taken me so long to get to your page... Keep up the good work..

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Stevo, sincerely from my heart, my friend. I love the things you got out of this p.. read more
So beautiful exhaled dear Friend!

"Where I hope to find you…" Your closing is such a testament that you are a ~believer~ that souls by the law of true love gravitate to each other throughout time and dimensions...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Szép szavak barátom, megvan teljesen .... köszönöm x thank you thank you!!!!! ;)
PearlPoet

7 Years Ago

~~~~~~~big smile~~~~~~ nagyon megleptel engem most te Dragasag!!

7 Years Ago

Smiles back :)) És most én vagyok még jobban meglepett :) kedves barátom .... Sok szeretettel! l.. read more
this is absolutely beautiful, I usually stray towards darker poetry but this left me speechless.
thank you so much :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much Kora, means much to me, I have some darker pieces too, though, and a lot I didn'.. read more
"Days we traveled, without effect,
I have seen pain,
And have slain,
So did you..."
Most of us learn the hard way. If we are lucky. Find true beauty and happiness. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you dear John, for feeling the piece, I can't thank you enough for the support. :) Elisa

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