~ Episode

~ Episode

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~ Episode, Elisa Laura, The Love I feel deep Inside...

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~ Episode

 

 

For you, I would dance infinitely,

Along the sparkling canals

Of Amsterdam,

 

In the depths of the night,

Where I live, and see;

 

And feel the passion of my death,

Slowly creep in, at every pass I make…

 

I want to touch your ivory beauty,

Almost taste, the passion of your strings;

Where you and me collide in fire…

 

Your dark shine, your hair;

And the reflection of the morning glory

Your teeth as white as our kiss;

 

All this makes our music more intense,

We are love and the invisible…

 

Evaporated air whirls through my fingers,

And I finally breathe out, my last breath...

 

It was you, for who I shone, and 

                It was you I played…

 

 

-        Elisa Laura

© 2013


Author's Note


Music by: "Franz Liszt - Liebestraum - Love Dream"
Enjoy xx

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I just floated through the whole read... on a cloud... in a dream.
Really effortless... stunning metaphors. At one with the instrument.
Its like the fingers are the hammers. Love or the piano.... yes to both.
To the pen, most certainly.

Beautiful writing Elisa-


Posted 7 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Oh thank you so much my friend again, for reading me. I appreciate it very much, I'm so happy you li.. read more
Odysseus Wanders

7 Years Ago

So happy I got it right... I was going to ask if you played, because it sure felt like it. I did not.. read more

7 Years Ago

Ha ha, yes, thank you so much, I have a big smile on my face right now friend... you have those fee.. read more



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I rate this 100 I left the rating off when I first commented! sorry

Posted 4 Years Ago


This seems effortless as others has written. I agree. Flows until the end.

Posted 4 Years Ago


You have me stunned this morning - utterly incredible words, and so beautifully rendered, Elisa! I've already read this particular poem several times, and there is so much to say, but it's difficult to find the right words.

"For you, I would dance infinitely/Along the sparkling canals/Of Amsterdam," just this short verse created so many images in my head. The love for music, and for an instrument, in a sense, is a very much like a love affair between human beings, is it not?

I can understand because I've felt the same love for my saxophone (as naughty as that may sound). There's almost a spiritual connection there sometimes, especially with someone for whom music comes naturally.

I must admit that I didn't realize it was about music at first, but as I always say, that's part of the fun of poetry. Each reader will interpret the poem differently, and even the author might see different things in it after she reads it again.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eric Pudalov

7 Years Ago

Oh, no worries. I've been feeling a bit "off" the past few days. Perhaps it's the tornados?

7 Years Ago

You stay safe, in your area.... in this Tornado season. ;)
Eric Pudalov

7 Years Ago

Thank you, I am (as much as possible)!
In my opinion it sounds like a description of a person that is inspired to keep playing a musical instrument motivated while contemplating a beautiful person.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

And that's a gorgeous interpretation Raven Sis.... I knew I could count on your magic.... :)
Lots of wonderful imagery. I can feel it. Feels like the anti-piece of something I wrote years ago called "Blood in the Key of a Jealous C".

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you dearly my friend :)
Beautiful and serene. You create magic with the words.

"I want to touch your ivory beauty,
Almost taste, the passion of your strings;
Where you and me collide in fire…"
Amazing lines! :)


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much my beautiful friend... :) I'm so so happy you enjoyed this rather emotional, and s.. read more
Anita Singh

7 Years Ago

Sure, Elisa! Thank you and keep the faith. :)

7 Years Ago

I will Annabella, I promise you, thank you once again, you are a dearheart. :)
Very, very pretty...soothing.
Refreshing read.
You are the poet dear Elisa.

Scotty xo

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Scott Metro

7 Years Ago

Have a good night Elisa.
Scotty xo

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Scotty Wolf :) always nice to see you by....
Thanks for feeling my music he.. read more
Scott Metro

7 Years Ago

:) xoxoxoxo
S.
This was lovely to read. It's so romantic and soft. The music goes very well with it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you dear one. I appreciate you!
Just beautiful. Nothing else I can say really

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

R. L. Hill

7 Years Ago

Of course, hun. I've got some fun ones that I think will make you smile. I hope so! Can't wait till .. read more

7 Years Ago

Oh wow, can't wait to give you my full credit, have longed for time, and space, to get back on here,.. read more
R. L. Hill

7 Years Ago

((HUGS)) xox
I just floated through the whole read... on a cloud... in a dream.
Really effortless... stunning metaphors. At one with the instrument.
Its like the fingers are the hammers. Love or the piano.... yes to both.
To the pen, most certainly.

Beautiful writing Elisa-


Posted 7 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Oh thank you so much my friend again, for reading me. I appreciate it very much, I'm so happy you li.. read more
Odysseus Wanders

7 Years Ago

So happy I got it right... I was going to ask if you played, because it sure felt like it. I did not.. read more

7 Years Ago

Ha ha, yes, thank you so much, I have a big smile on my face right now friend... you have those fee.. read more

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