~ Moonwater

~ Moonwater

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~ Moonwater, Elisa Laura, E.L. Death, Life, Dreams, Connection, White, High, Otherworldly, Surreal, Fantasy, Fictional, Message, Signs

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~ Moonwater

 

 

         Entangled, tied

             We felt before  -  we died

    In thoughts, death we kissed

        You and me

              All in white

 

           Moonwater - gleam,

     Shine so bright,

Upon our  faces with your light

 

         From here up high;

      We dance the sky, of blue and mist

 Of sleepless waltzes , and their twists

 

       We so lived in you, but died in me;

   Just one color now, is all we see

 

         Through the woods of high

    Surreal we become, as we die

          Moonwater shine!  

 

                          

                 “Let us fly”.

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

© 2014


Author's Note

Enjoy -x-

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That was so beautiful, like a whole book written perfectly in just a few words. So much story within this, it really blows my mind. The selection of music was amazing to have along with this piece. What is the name of the song? Your poem really takes me to a different place, I want to read it over and over so I can pretend that I live in that short moment. It was magical, no words can describe what you wrote. This review is pointless because the only way to respond to reading this is by the sign of a gaping mouth.

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

6 Years Ago

Michael, thank you so much oooh you humble me hehe... I am so glad, you truly enjoyed this dream (I .. read more



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Very beautiful feeling, and much whiteness of this poem, dear sister! I love how it sounds to the under-mind, it provokes dreams and creates images. This poem is like pure energy, flowing in you, which was even a burden transformed into happiness. Death is actually white, as it`s beginning of new life. Here there is such meaning, as well as Yin and Yang of the two souls, connected together with love. Finally the flying is what we should study, we cant without...

:: nour ::

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Ty
One of the most elegant pieces I have read in a long time.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

6 Years Ago

Thank you Ty, that means a lot to me. :)
A sensual dream state of mind here...Elisa..it wisp you away in a fascination --- where you can imagine and be in a out of body experience...with your counterpart...the design is whimsical...the words reflect a worldly scene of a place far away --- yet close your eyes and there the wonder comes to light...do you really die in a temporal haven...or do you just continue --- where you left off...you can die a thousand deaths and find love is waiting for you...in a place and time...where nothing is a measure --- but a reality of what seems a fantasy...hope you get there again soon...do fly and stretch your wings...its a long way to the bottom...just keep aiming high and don't look down...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Glen Yumang Manese

6 Years Ago

RR's --- so I can give back --- instead of doing everything all at once...its too much of a burden t.. read more
Glen Yumang Manese

6 Years Ago

Take your time...Elisa...when the time feels right...that when you will come...I've stopped my...read more

6 Years Ago

Dear, Glen, thanks, but I don't do send out RR's, neither I accept them, since all the years I'm her.. read more
Pure talent right here.
I'm starting to believe you are not of this world..
Your poetry does something to me..
I wan't to say that this is definitely one my favorites!
Brilliant!

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much my dear friend, for these words, they mean much to me. I'm really honored by your .. read more
╰☆╮I'm probably one of your biggest fans. I love the title of this, and adore the poem itself. The flow is elegant and peaceful for me. Amazing work!╰☆╮

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

6 Years Ago

That means so much to me my dear friend, for people like you, I keep on being here, and do my thing,.. read more
"We so lived in you, but died in me;"
This line penetrated my thinking as I read this poetry.
Again the picture and the music are pared like fine wine to a perfect meal.
lovely work Eli.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

6 Years Ago

Good it did ^^ :) it has a special meaning.... thank you for all Scott :) so appreciated!
That was so beautiful, like a whole book written perfectly in just a few words. So much story within this, it really blows my mind. The selection of music was amazing to have along with this piece. What is the name of the song? Your poem really takes me to a different place, I want to read it over and over so I can pretend that I live in that short moment. It was magical, no words can describe what you wrote. This review is pointless because the only way to respond to reading this is by the sign of a gaping mouth.

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

6 Years Ago

Michael, thank you so much oooh you humble me hehe... I am so glad, you truly enjoyed this dream (I .. read more
Hey you, dear poetess and all things other worldly. Your words always make me happy, the feelings you provoke, the sense of love, touching, and exotic fragrances, all under your poetic skies. Hugs, hugs, and kiss!
-xxxxxxxxxx-

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much my other worldly friend :) I'm feeling so happy to have you by! Many hugs and kiss.. read more
dear Elisa Laura... You have composed
the music of love in poetry. When you
feel love... your body blooms with ecstasy.
truly... Pat


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

6 Years Ago

Thank you dear friend, for the beautiful words, hugs, Lis
"We so lived in you, but died in me." Wow such a powerful line. This poem was absolutely lovely. It was a pleasure to my senses to read. Thank you for sharing !:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Rose! I truly am pleased you liked this piece! -x-

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