~ Echoes

~ Echoes

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~ To love is to know distance, to love is to set one free...

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~ Echoes


 

 

  The dusk of thoughts, felt aloof

          Where once a spectrum of light

From your presence held home,

             In the darker shimmer, minute by

Minute where the sun settled down, and the trees swayed

                        I silently kept my faith,

                     I loved my sky of

       Emerald hue, where clouds in little light passed by;

  And the sea sang songs, with foam of wisdom

                   Whooshing against the quay -

          Your voice, echoed a thousand times

                  Where a hundred times you’d  say;

       You’re winged my love, follow me and you

             Will see, where I just hide at day.


 

 

       ~ Elisa Laura                                                 

© 2014


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This speaks in volumes to me...Love echoing across distances was felt instantly while reading this.

I adore how almost every line line is broken. Bringing the love back around, over and over it seems..(I really like this style of formatting.)

The faith being silently kept. ^^ The beautiful night imagery crossing skies and oceans..Then the ending with the truth. Hehe (You are winged dear and so is your poetry.)

Finally the challenge. Follow on. xo


Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Wow, thank you for this stunning review, I can tell you, you did really feel it and understand it. (.. read more



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Eli, this is magical...
I feel like this was a dream poem as well... a dream I have seen but never with the words and music you gave to me here today. This is like having someone color a black and white dream with Technicolor. Beyond lovely Eli.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend! I do so appreciate this review, I tried to reach within a dream... :)
 David Scott

9 Years Ago

Be assured, you have reached beyond you own dreams with this one.

9 Years Ago

That means a lot, thank you...
Dearest Eli,

This is so beautifully conveyed... I felt the hope soaring in the sky...
The wings of dreams pausing to give love and light...
These are words from the heart, which echo faith in respite...

I love the whimsical tone in this piece...Eloquent write, Sis!~xoxo~:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Dearest Sis, So good to have your words by, they mean so much to me! :) You felt is so good, so real.. read more
Wow. This is a really great piece. I love all of the imagery. The flow was amazing - So smooth. There's many lines here that need to be remembered and echoed! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Thank you so so much Michael. :) always a pleasure to have you by! Thanks for loving the piece :)
Michael (Letters and Lifelines)

9 Years Ago

My pleasure :)
umm Lovely Piece E L Echoes are just lovely...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Thank you kindly sweet Renée...... :)
Renée

9 Years Ago

always a pleasure E L ( :
Oh, the imagery was fantastic, Elisa. So breathtaking.
"The dusk of thoughts, felt aloof
Where once a spectrum of light"
I can see the poignant change you portrayed in this line. It seems like a turning point of something from good to bad, a hopeful longing for something that cannot be grasped.
I enjoyed the world play. There was 'that' feeling of wishing but at the same time, losing it at once, in just a blink of an eye. I was drawn by the thought of missing someone who is important to me. A very heartfelt poem. I liked it. ^^


Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Thrinna dear, I'm so glad with your beautiful reviews, I have the feeling you rea.. read more
Thea

9 Years Ago

You're welcome, Elisa! Keep these awesome poems coming! ^^

9 Years Ago

Thank you dear ^^ I try too hehe, :) -x-
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Pax
"the sea sang songs, with foam of wisdom"

Truly a marvel view, a learned insight to just be free of your throughts, running, hiding just around the corners of your hearts... to silently love the far away and let go another day, just love in a beautiful way of words and wisdom, to blast the loneliness and kept faith live in us to keep on moving on... life and love as beautiful in your words big sis... Great work!

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9 Years Ago

Thank you dear, for making me smile, that line was important to me, you picked it out... you really .. read more
Pax

9 Years Ago

hugs... take care always... and you are most welcome... :)
love embrace us all as we find ours.. read more
amazing words describe the dawn that coming, malam yang indah dalam balutan nuansa.

puisi yang indah :)

good wiring Nona Lisa

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Terima kasih, kata-kata indah oleh anda nyong manis Maluku ;) selamat malam, sampai besok! :)
This speaks in volumes to me...Love echoing across distances was felt instantly while reading this.

I adore how almost every line line is broken. Bringing the love back around, over and over it seems..(I really like this style of formatting.)

The faith being silently kept. ^^ The beautiful night imagery crossing skies and oceans..Then the ending with the truth. Hehe (You are winged dear and so is your poetry.)

Finally the challenge. Follow on. xo


Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Wow, thank you for this stunning review, I can tell you, you did really feel it and understand it. (.. read more
Will see, where I just hide at day.
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Will see, where I just hide that day.

I wonder if that is what you meant in the last finale...this is full on imagery ---
also liked how this captures the moment in the ending lines...
the whole piece is resonating...but that's just my bottom line...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago


Thank you very much Glen, no, I meant it "at" day, for it's night in the poem, it's shimmerin.. read more
Glen Yumang Manese

9 Years Ago

you're welcome...thanks for the relay...good day...

9 Years Ago

My pleasure, friend, night here, but good day to you! :) thanks for your review!
I appreciate.. read more

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