~ Natsuko

~ Natsuko

A Poem by
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~ Freedom is just Chaos, with better lighting...

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~ Natsuko

 

 

She walks on a hot sunny summer day,

Thinking in mind of her futures way

 

Thoughts full of passion and extreme desire,

Discovery trips, as she travels the golden paths

 

Vast landscapes full of life, gleaming...

Woods of pleasure, dreams of love

 

A painter in it's pure element

The winter makes her yearn

 

In body and spirit true equality

Literally reunited out of hidden anxiety

 

No sense of time, just being there

A gentle breeze like a warm blanket

 

Unity with nature, and the oxygen of the cosmos

Pure freedom, fading fear slips away,

 

And she feels satisfaction is here to grow

She thinks of running, and never turn around

 

The summer child in her parallel world

Though in her mind it’s still winter

 

Where everything needs to thaw,

As for all the beauty to come will bring warmth.

 

With the patience of time,

And time in all ways of living,

 

Shall be there for her, where she may return

To achieve her inner state of living

 

 

Natsuko is her name

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

© 2013


Author's Note

Thank you xx



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She escapes her winter world
A changling by desire
One within all natures eyes
A changling by desire ...

This is gentle .. flowing ... gliding to and fro ..away from realities reach ..
A world serene within a world .. a time full with delicate seasons ...

Wow ... beautiful crafted .. ... Jazz xo


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8 Years Ago

It is so connected to my roots.... I loved it instantly! ♥
J. J.  Nightingale

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♥ .. J.

8 Years Ago

XX ♥ E.



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Geez this poem is like a written Valium! It's so serene and calming, and the music adds to it's ambiance. It dances off the page so effortlessly, lovely. I can't say more, it's exquisite as always my dear friend. Can you bottle this poetry please? ;-)

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8 Years Ago

I will make it for you a special Gianti love... to open in eternaty, when we both are gone, and reme.. read more

8 Years Ago

*eternity.... ;-)
such beautiful music ~ in your words

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8 Years Ago

Sou grato a você meu amigo, obrigado :)
Till soon :)
She escapes her winter world
A changling by desire
One within all natures eyes
A changling by desire ...

This is gentle .. flowing ... gliding to and fro ..away from realities reach ..
A world serene within a world .. a time full with delicate seasons ...

Wow ... beautiful crafted .. ... Jazz xo


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

8 Years Ago

It is so connected to my roots.... I loved it instantly! ♥
J. J.  Nightingale

8 Years Ago

♥ .. J.

8 Years Ago

XX ♥ E.
great images, there are some truly great lines here, you are growing...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

8 Years Ago

An older write, that is interesting you found me growing back in the days, anyway thank you so much,.. read more
Wow. You're incredible.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

8 Years Ago

Thank you Cole, I can't wait to have some time to read yours...
a free-spirited person, gliding on the free breeze of living her own name. very nice work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

8 Years Ago

Thank you dear captain, to see that.... I am. :)
My favorite line is: "No sense of time, just being there" the soul needs freedom and peace. What a wonderful write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

8 Years Ago

Thank you dear x
You do more than mere poetry, you seem to display a beautiful array of sensory detail and adventure; simply put, you write short poetic stories.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

:) thank you hermanito, always a pleasure to read you and your words :D
Ah a child of the summer longs to live forever!

-only know what Natsuko means because I looked it up. :)
Still like always your imagery is inpecable and your mastering of the words is fantastic!
Love this one a lot!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

Inda, you're clever lol :D thank you so much for your words, they always cheer me up, and mean much .. read more
You rule at this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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