~ Dreams till Dawn

~ Dreams till Dawn

A Poem by
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~ Nothing is what is seems, it's pointless to understand me, cause you probably can't. This is another one to think about ;)

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~ Dreams till Dawn

 

 

Beautiful memories, treasured as pearls,

Days that withered like flowers in the prolonged sun

Sparkling hidden by reflection of each gleaming spectrum

Love like never before, chosen, in silence and rest

 

Dancing thoughts walking supernatural high

Deep feelings, warm thoughts hidden inside

Vivid imagination, with a smile like a child

Dreaming with full consciousness, even in dust and ashes

 

Not knowing what the future will bring,

Every day as a gift from the highest universe

Dark days, I love to paint over as light,

Not to feel sorrow, but to disguise a fight...

 

Hidden colored flowers with their lovely treasure,

For the love of bees, and their purpose to make

Peaceful nectar out of use of the seeds

But colorful gleam to get the attractive attention

 

Roads of happiness, which disappeared in moments of time

Glow of vitality hidden, but still not deadly deceased

Rich thoughts make real images, of the weight,

If lively objects, jump with truth of love ...

 

Good days, cover the lesser

If life all is Yin and Yang,

Everything in balance is be found

Through our precious breathing

 

I am quiet, and on our way to our other dimension

Dreamland will abduct me, to this wonderful world

What I do not need is to be afraid of bad lights and super naturals

And will rest until the dawn creaks under my feet.

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

© 2012


Author's Note



I love, the way I love, and love is within me.
Thank you. xx


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outstanding images painted within these well crafted words. Yin and Yang go well with the breathing of meditation. Letting go of the fear of the creeks in the night. Learning to let go of past pains and rejoyous in the memories in the past that allow us to smile and bath in the sunlight. I love this piece from the first line til the last.

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7 Years Ago

Thank you very much dear, we both have been so busy, can't wait to read you and your latest pieces :.. read more
Poetic Beauty

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Thank you. I have been able to read and write more the last few days. I so have missed the third l.. read more

7 Years Ago

Aw, dear, I hope you will find soon some more time for yourself, you know sometimes, we just miss th.. read more



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outstanding images painted within these well crafted words. Yin and Yang go well with the breathing of meditation. Letting go of the fear of the creeks in the night. Learning to let go of past pains and rejoyous in the memories in the past that allow us to smile and bath in the sunlight. I love this piece from the first line til the last.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much dear, we both have been so busy, can't wait to read you and your latest pieces :.. read more
Poetic Beauty

7 Years Ago

Thank you. I have been able to read and write more the last few days. I so have missed the third l.. read more

7 Years Ago

Aw, dear, I hope you will find soon some more time for yourself, you know sometimes, we just miss th.. read more
A beautiful mind wrote this. Even in darkness, it sees light, and even in dreams, it lives.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you dearheart :) and thank you for picking that out... I'll read you already so many times, I .. read more
Distant horizons

7 Years Ago

No worries sweetie. I know (x)
Elisa, there is a true balance in this piece that I have found enchanting... excellent poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you dear Cherrie, for these words, it means much to me!
Ahh, the sweet harmony of this, it's delicious. I'll savor it and add it to my collection. Poignant is so overused, but it is perfect in this case.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much sweetheart :)
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"If life all is Yin and Yang, Everything in balance is be found"
~ now that's a wisdom i found in you... i think balance is everything... and i see you are in control balancing everything life has to offer... love is within us all... and yours is truly a light and very bright....
Excellent write my friend!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much sweetest friend xx :)
Dear Elisa,

If I were an editor for a magazine and saw this beautiful poem,
I'll make sure to contact you and make you publish this.
I'll make sure you get your writing career started,
Because you deserve to live from your great works.

From a best friend,
Greg.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you dear Greg for you encourage... :) you make me smile
very beautiful and vivid picture you create, dear eli! so much life in the red color, and desire and need of change! Red has so many meanings, of fire, transformation, love, blood, active fight, heart, strong mind and body..and autumn also brings some red color :) i love the way u expressed emotions and views using the nature, everything around is a sign for inner feeling...we have just to walk, travel, fly and listen! thank u ofr your jorney!
xx No♥r ~


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Beautiful spoken my sweetest
spiritual and harmonious... an important message about the balance in life.. and the universe. your love shines through.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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7 Years Ago

:)
This is lovely and epitomizes your spirit dear. Especially:

Good days, cover the lesser
If life all is Yin and Yang,
Everything in balance is be found
Through our precious breathing

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you dear for picking those out.... great soul! I know we are both from the Martial Art world.... read more
Came by and read it again... the positive and uplifting vibe of the poem is a great energy boost for the soul.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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