~ Dreams till Dawn

~ Dreams till Dawn

A Poem by
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~ Nothing is what is seems, it's pointless to understand me, cause you probably can't. This is another one to think about ;)

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~ Dreams till Dawn

 

 

Beautiful memories, treasured as pearls,

Days that withered like flowers in the prolonged sun

Sparkling hidden by reflection of each gleaming spectrum

Love like never before, chosen, in silence and rest

 

Dancing thoughts walking supernatural high

Deep feelings, warm thoughts hidden inside

Vivid imagination, with a smile like a child

Dreaming with full consciousness, even in dust and ashes

 

Not knowing what the future will bring,

Every day as a gift from the highest universe

Dark days, I love to paint over as light,

Not to feel sorrow, but to disguise a fight...

 

Hidden colored flowers with their lovely treasure,

For the love of bees, and their purpose to make

Peaceful nectar out of use of the seeds

But colorful gleam to get the attractive attention

 

Roads of happiness, which disappeared in moments of time

Glow of vitality hidden, but still not deadly deceased

Rich thoughts make real images, of the weight,

If lively objects, jump with truth of love ...

 

Good days, cover the lesser

If life all is Yin and Yang,

Everything in balance is be found

Through our precious breathing

 

I am quiet, and on our way to our other dimension

Dreamland will abduct me, to this wonderful world

What I do not need is to be afraid of bad lights and super naturals

And will rest until the dawn creaks under my feet.

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

© 2012


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Author's Note



I love, the way I love, and love is within me.
Thank you. xx


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outstanding images painted within these well crafted words. Yin and Yang go well with the breathing of meditation. Letting go of the fear of the creeks in the night. Learning to let go of past pains and rejoyous in the memories in the past that allow us to smile and bath in the sunlight. I love this piece from the first line til the last.

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So sweet to read. The day with natural gift is living with us always. Good construction of words. Wonderful to read. My regards dear. Do write more about nature which is with you.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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wow. this was stunning... it made me smile! It makes life so mysterious and magical! ha ha, i love how you create images through your words. The metaphors are amazing. This is wonderful. Rich with such sunshine that brightens up any person's day!! Thank you!

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hi dear, this was like Keats with the soul of a woman. Just one little note, can you please not sign them when you submit them, since I don't want to be biased at all xD

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this is a wonderfully done poem. has a mystic quality to it. excellent write.

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great poem

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Life has its down moments but if we keep a positive attitude those moments can be overcome quickly.

Not knowing what the future will bring,
Every day as a gift from the highest universe
Dark days, I love to paint over as light,
Not to feel sorrow, but to disguise a fight...

Absolutely love it. Don't give into the pain or it will grow and spread.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Your poetry always has a beautiful feel to it. Each stanta in this beauty took me on a serene journey, one I wish I could of stayed for a spell! Excellent writing my dear friend!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Dancing thoughts walking supernatural high
Deep feelings, warm thoughts hidden inside
Vivid imagination, with a smile like a child
Dreaming with full conciousness, even in dust and ashes

Perfect! I know that feeling haha, but it's always a special little thing, that state of mind, hm? Also, if you had/have a book published, I shall buy it indeed. :3

~Adora
xo

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Hidden colored flowers with their lovely treasure,
For the love of bees, and their purpose to make
Peaceful nectar out of use of the seeds
But colorful gleam to get the attractive attention

love your appreciation for nature, and, dreams.. who wouldn't want to meet in the middle of your bridge in the sky.. looking over the ocean of sky and wind swept waves, of possiblity..

very, very, lovely Elisa
xo


Posted 9 Years Ago


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"Good days, cover the lesser
If life all is Yin and Yang,
Everything in balance is be found
Through our precious breathing"

This verse could literally stand on its own! Beautiful work, Elisa!


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