~ Dreams till Dawn

~ Dreams till Dawn

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~ Nothing is what is seems, it's pointless to understand me, cause you probably can't. This is another one to think about ;)

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~ Dreams till Dawn

 

 

Beautiful memories, treasured as pearls,

Days that withered like flowers in the prolonged sun

Sparkling hidden by reflection of each gleaming spectrum

Love like never before, chosen, in silence and rest

 

Dancing thoughts walking supernatural high

Deep feelings, warm thoughts hidden inside

Vivid imagination, with a smile like a child

Dreaming with full consciousness, even in dust and ashes

 

Not knowing what the future will bring,

Every day as a gift from the highest universe

Dark days, I love to paint over as light,

Not to feel sorrow, but to disguise a fight...

 

Hidden colored flowers with their lovely treasure,

For the love of bees, and their purpose to make

Peaceful nectar out of use of the seeds

But colorful gleam to get the attractive attention

 

Roads of happiness, which disappeared in moments of time

Glow of vitality hidden, but still not deadly deceased

Rich thoughts make real images, of the weight,

If lively objects, jump with truth of love ...

 

Good days, cover the lesser

If life all is Yin and Yang,

Everything in balance is be found

Through our precious breathing

 

I am quiet, and on our way to our other dimension

Dreamland will abduct me, to this wonderful world

What I do not need is to be afraid of bad lights and super naturals

And will rest until the dawn creaks under my feet.

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

© 2012


Author's Note



I love, the way I love, and love is within me.
Thank you. xx


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outstanding images painted within these well crafted words. Yin and Yang go well with the breathing of meditation. Letting go of the fear of the creeks in the night. Learning to let go of past pains and rejoyous in the memories in the past that allow us to smile and bath in the sunlight. I love this piece from the first line til the last.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

Thank you very much dear, we both have been so busy, can't wait to read you and your latest pieces :.. read more
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Wonderfully lyrical, whisking me away to another world. Love your style!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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ooooohhhh my sistah!!! never cease to amaze me!! your words are so rich and vivid I love the way you create such a master piece with them...
**tips my lyrical wand to you** GREAT WRITE!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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you create such rich visuals in your work..what a beautifully uplifting piece..

Posted 9 Years Ago


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the last line, a perfect way to finish the prose. The cool thing about your pieces is how you illustrate the intimate privacy between your thoughts and your emotions. Very difficult to do, but you do it so fluently.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Nice imagery. I felt myself falling, slo-mo, into your dreams. Colors flowering, water flowing, worlds being born and dying all around me. Really cool read.
Cheers!
RG

Posted 9 Years Ago


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I absolutely loved that..to death! The rhythm was impeccable, and the imagery...wow. Yes, as day and night cycle by with thoughts of love so do we carry our weight of emotions. I treasure every single part and feel a significant attraction to dream and meet with the landscape of feelings you have just described. Thanks!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Roads of happiness, which disappeared in moments of time
Glow of vitality hidden, but still not deadly deceased
Rich thoughts make real images, of the weight,
If lively objects, jump with truth of love ...

*Sigh* You should be published by now! Your work is amazing, I am always falling through your writes, carried off in my mind with the imagery you delicately weave with perfect words. thank you :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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