~ Your Poems Dance On My Piano

~ Your Poems Dance On My Piano

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~ As music notes out of silence, become a living creation

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~ Your Poems Dance On My Piano

 

 

 

Every sense is a deep inner perception,

Of your deepest emotions, I want to play,

Piano’s burning heat, hits every note

Of your heartbeat that far away

 

As the rhythm shall divinely continue

Let me translate you in music,

And let me make you some Jazz

As you made my day, with all you did confess

 

Let me dance in my mind, and I move the Piano strings

As I feel me better when I play them deep

And the fate in rain, as spring brings hope

Makes you the song where I dance on until I sleep

 

Deep octaves, blissful crying crazy piano notes,

Rambling from upon the high, and down in low

As your poetry does made ballet sparkle

And as your words did made me grow

 

I shall treasure all  of you what lives inside me

I breathe you deeply in every way,

As I shall continue to write for you until the day

We are our own strings of universe playing the notes divinely gray...

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

© 2013


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The spirit in your voice, its purity, spreads warmly through your poetry. The mind begins to hear you play the sweet melodic tunes upon the ivory keys. Such a serene and blissful feeling as the image dances in my mind, revealing your face, eyes closed and smiling as your soothing flow eminates... Peace. Love this sis!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much sis, it is an older one reconstructed.. so glad you like it, peace and love honey .. read more



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A deep jazz poem. Nay a song. Smooth and late night.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Yes, Ken, it is... smooth and deep jazzy like in an old dusty cafe in Amsterdam :) thank you so much.. read more
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Pax
i felt your last stanza brings love to your friends and readers... hugs to a heartwarming piece dearest... well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much, as a hidden musician, I do love to play and gamble with love notes... :) hugs bac.. read more
Pax

11 Years Ago

i wish i was too...but music has not rooted its roots in my hands... plain and simple i suck at it.... read more
This is a great concept. Entwining love and music together. This is beautiful and the words are romantic.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much... :)
Poetic Beauty

11 Years Ago

you are welcome
i picture you reading this aloud...in a smokey cafe with the piano music playing in the background, some kind of bluesy rhythm..

terrific mood set by the tone of this piece.

jacob

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you j. :)
Love the end and the whole thing is soothing and calming, almost like a lullaby; loved it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear Inda, if this was a lullaby to you, I'm happy:) x
I'm so jazzed by this, excellent write Eli...lots of heart and soul in this read. Nice!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Xxx :) you may know x
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Things that make you go hmmmm ;-) xo

11 Years Ago

That's it.... You know, the untouchable, is that photonic most yearning and romantic.... But we poet.. read more
very nice, lyrical is your words are. simply brilliant!

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0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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11 Years Ago

Thank you dear, Sorry, phone and auto correct... happy you are around x
captain

11 Years Ago

no problem and our welcome.
Its amazing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you kindly Gio :)
The spirit in your voice, its purity, spreads warmly through your poetry. The mind begins to hear you play the sweet melodic tunes upon the ivory keys. Such a serene and blissful feeling as the image dances in my mind, revealing your face, eyes closed and smiling as your soothing flow eminates... Peace. Love this sis!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much sis, it is an older one reconstructed.. so glad you like it, peace and love honey .. read more

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Added on March 12, 2012
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