Stuck on earth reaching for the clouds

this poem is about rising against the impossible and achieving goals

Dreaming of the day when I would fly away hopeing for the day all troubles will fade away i will never head back but i will keep foward until i find the thing im looking for yes i will keep going no matter if it takes me miles i may be stuck on earth but im reaching for the clouds nay sayers will not faze me downers will always chase me but if i believe that i can achieve then i will succed i will take my leave walking above the moutains swimming through the sea all my dreams sooner or later we all belong to me crazy they may say i am delousional they may say i seem but to me that doesn't matter i will always be me here i am finally i made it ill say it loud ill say it proud i was once on earth but now im in the clouds    

Author's Note

this is my first poem i hope you like it

Reviews

[khalid]

yessss, i really like it and i cant imagine this is your first one. you look to have written many before it maybe you mean this is your first posted poem anyways, the poem is very nice challenging feelings are so much appearing in it. one thing i didnt like about it, if you deal with this think i think the poem will be so much nice, why done you put it in a poem shape?? just rewrite it in poem shape please and i am sure it will be wonderful