I'm (not) okay

So, I've been fighting a depression-like thing for a while, I'm not saying depression exactly, but that's how it feels, and I've never really told anyone, not really. I suck at poems, but here....

I’m always asking how people feel.

I’m always making sure people are okay.

I’m always doing things to make people feel better.

I am always there for you all.

 

But who is there for me?

Who is there to tell me,

That I’m beautiful when I feel ugly

Who is there to pick me up;

When I fall?

Who is there for me?

I have all these secrets,

All this pain,

Hidden from everyone.

But when I confide,

I don’t get an “are you okay”

I get a chuckle and a

“you’ll be fine”

I’m there for anyone,

Stranger or friend,

But,

who is there for me?

Reviews

[matrixmark]

Written from the heart, I can tell. I feel like this sometimes, its as if all the people around you just want all the attention for themselves - needy and wanting. But when you look around when you need help they don't seem to be there for you

This was well written and so very true.

A good read - could easily relate.

Mark.

[WriterGirl101]

Thank you for the review. :)

[KittyKatgirl]

There is so much writing that you have not been told about. This sounds like me and Lexy and of course you. Naww hun you know I am always here for you. You know where to find me whether it is on facebook or here on WC I am just a message away. Please know that you can always come to me about anything I will always be here to listen and do my best to help. I don't care if it is at three in the morning I will be there. You deserve the 100/100

[WriterGirl101]

Thank you so much. And yes, I know I can count on you and a few others and it mean a lot.. :)

[KittyKatgirl]

Ok good I am always here if you ever need or want someone to talk to. :) Also naughty you for once again not notifying me of the new pieces of writing you have added. XD

[WriterGirl101]

Awe I'm sorry!!!!! XDXD

[DoormanDan]

Oh, I've had many instances in my life where I could relate to this. Sometimes it's the the seemingly happiest and most optimistic of us all that actually turn out to be the most emotionally hurt.

I just want you to know that we are all here rooting for you. You have the power to beat down your negative emotions. We believe that, your family believes it, and your friends believe it. When I read this, I do not at all see somebody who's worthless, I see a very strong, kind, respectable individual who is going down a tougher road than many of us are. Some people in the world will just try to tell you to suck it up and deal with it, but that's because they don't know what it's like to feel the way you do. They don't know how quickly it can ruin a day. Don't listen to those people. Being depressed does not make you weak or anything, the fact that you are fighting it makes you an extremely strong individual. But hey, even the strong need support every now and then, so when it feels like it's becoming too much to handle by yourself, turn to those you love. They will, without a doubt, listen to what you have to say, and they will most definitely care as well. I sincerely hope everything gets better for you soon.

Oh, and this poem doesn't at all suck. It's a very well written, neatly flowing, emotionally powered free-verse that deserves other writers' respect. :)

[WriterGirl101]

Thank you so very much for your review. It really made my day. It's really appreciated. :)

[DoormanDan]

You're welcome, and I'm glad to hear that it did :).

[Sarah]

This is such a realistic poem that will hit home with many people. I've always noticed that the ones struggling the most always appear the happiest, and the ones reaching out to make sure someone else is okay are usually the ones who need a helping hand. Great description of how that pain feels to be ignored and unwanted.

[WriterGirl101]

Thank you very much. I agree; I guess because the ones in pain know what it's like and don't want others to feel that way. That's how it is in my case anyways..

[Troy Allan Poe]

i love this! i was there once.. but your gift is always there for you! poetry is art and its comforting to know youre not alone! check out my new spoken word on my page itll give some comfort! keep up the good work writer girl!

[WriterGirl101]

Thank you so very much. :) I will definitely do that.

[Troy Allan Poe]

no problem! looking forward to checking out your readings!

[zaisham9393]

People can be selfish and mean and take others for granted .It's not easy to break away from a selfish person,and I know it sucks when you care so much for others and get nothing in return.
Anyway, thank you for sharing :)!

[WriterGirl101]

Thanks for the awesome review.
yeah, it sucks....

[PenguinEmpiress]

This is really good and it really explains and displays the human nature, and what happens when you become the pillar that holds everyone awake. As in like, being independent and strong so no one worries about how you feel, cause they believe you can stand on your own feet.

[Bear]

That is the downside of appearing strong, wise and confident all the time, people overlook that you are also human and even if you don't need help you still like to hear that others care. SO how are you my friend, are you doing okay? Bravo! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[WriterGirl101]

Thank you. :)
I'd say I'm fine right now, but you wouldn't believe me lol. I'm okay. XD

[Bear]

Poetry is a great outlet, for years it has help let my tears and fears my woes and worries which is why I say poetry is a best friend :~)

[WriterGirl101]

Yeah I suppose it is. It's a great way to express yourself.

[Wølfy]

Sounds like me sometimes. I am always trying to help people.

[WriterGirl101]

Yeah. I don't like seeing people hurting so I do what I can to help. I guess it's bc I know exactly how it feels.

[Wølfy]

Yeah, and the fact you are a good person. :)

[WriterGirl101]

Yeah I suppose so lol