Outside Looking In

A Poem by Ameli

Can you think of a meaning behind this one?

There isn't any solid ground

This view from my window.

Balconies, they seem so small

This view from my window.

Through the glass I see my past

This view from my window.

There are all the tears I cried

This view from my window.

There are all the happy times

This view from my window.

There is all my joy and pain

This view from my window.

A soft breeze strokes my face

This view from my window.

Calming quiet fills this place

This view from my window.

I think I rather like it here

This view from my window.

© 2012 Ameli

Author's Note

I was trying to go for a more abstract poem this time to make people think about what exactly is going on...but I think I have to work more in that aspect cause it just seems pretty obvious.
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Added on September 3, 2012
Last Updated on September 3, 2012
Tags: window, sky, memory, looking

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Ameli

Panama City, FL

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Hello everyone~ I joined hoping to get some feedback on my writing cause I'm too shy to show it to people in real life... Ameli is my pen name cause I like to stay a secret~ I hope my writing will .. more..

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