The Result

The Result

A Poem by ღSherion~Raineღ

Face is hot

Hands are cold

Feelings hidden

Beneath the mold

I have no choice

I have to choose

It's easy to win

And hard to lose

What's crushing me most

Is what i have to pick

When I try to fight back

The pain comes too quick

The answer's there

So I close my eyes

I blackout the hatred

and all of the lies

The result is a gun

and a bit of blood

but the gun doesnt matter

because i'm already gone.

© 2009 ღSherion~Raineღ


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Wow. I am like amazed. Your flow was amazing along with your emotion and story. But to get to the piont of this review. I must give deails. The way you wrote this, with the short lines full of deatails and the endiong was amazing.
Great job, thanks for entering and good luck. =]

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So much emotion in this poem, very well written.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow. such a beautifull work of art and yet so sad. i like it.espically the ending.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Dark and morbid, but very well written. Especially the end, or, all of the lines after "The answers there". Those lines were superb. Nice work. =D

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Added on October 22, 2009

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ღSherion~Raineღ
ღSherion~Raineღ

Boxville, MI



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Hiya! My name is Sherion Raine. I'm 16 years old. I've been a poet for a long time. If you wanna know something about me, JUST ASK! ElectricFM! more..

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