Eyes of Hazel

Eyes of hazel

a stormy grey

Pale skin

on a cloudy day

Hair of wind

where he lays

Arms of strength

in a rough play

A smile that glows

and never frays

I want be with him

Always

 

Far away, i look

but not stare

He's the one i cant have

and can't bear.

No one can steal

and take away

His heart is already gone

and claimed.

But, I won't lose nor fail

to win his heart

I'll shoot a dart

and let it sail.

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Beautiful outpouring of a passionate yearning for another heart that unfortunately is off-limits for whatever reason.. rejection felt in the undertones yet you handle it so elegantly. If you love something set it free .. if it comes back to you than it's yours.. if not than it never was.. that was what came to my mind and practised more than once in my lifetime. We only live once.. to pine those where it's unknown is to stay locked in a cage.. and with passion such as shared in this writing.. would be a complete waste! I hope you find someone worthy .. that wants and yearns you as much as you did this person.. if not live life to the fullest! Great job!

[Coyote Poetry]

We must try to reach for what we desire or we will be sad wishing for things we should of done. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[A]

Wow, very nice. @@

This is amazing. @@

The second half is just brilliant. =D

[deeps]

This is amazing, very well expressed emotion in this,
Wonderful flow of words too.

[The Creator's Little Ro..]

Wonderful! I like how you expressed emotion. And the feelings are very...I don't want to say normal, because I don't like that word...they're true to your average girl, you don't have to be special to feel this way, and I like that.