With You

With you, holding hands and singing a loving song,

this is the first time that I ever felt that I actually belong.

 

With you, hugging me so tightly afraid to let go,

even though its easier to say "yes" than "no",

 

With you, loving me this way makes it harder to breathe,

but it makes it more difficult to ever want to leave.

 

With you, love is beautiful without words,

silence has other doubtful concerns.

 

With you, I can be anything and I can go anywhere,

but now when I look at you it doesn't feel like you're even there.

 

 

Reviews

[Happy Cereal]

Very cute poem, I like the simple joy of it, but the first line:

'With you, clutching your hand in my palm and holding along'

Doesn't really make sense. Otherwise, good job! :D