breathe

breathe

A Poem by Beautiful Chaos

                         my cigarette starts to burn out

paralleling my life

   a hole in the shoe of whoever its dropped on

                      the smoke starts to fill

              my insides

                      intoxicating at first

until you want to gag.

                   your addiction?

           useless.

                       it only leads to the end.

  light up another

                 thinking maybe it will be stronger

this time

                     leading to yet

                                  another

                     smashed

                                 filter

                                   on the pavement

of your soul.

© 2008 Beautiful Chaos


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This is very dark and intense. I definitely got a visual while reading this piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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I'm bethany. I love to write, and I hope it gets me somewhere later on in life. I love many different genres of writing and there are many things that interest me. I'm also really big into pyschology .. more..

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