Someday

I don't know if my prayers for strength have been answered
Or if I found anew way to be stronger
Cause I remember a month ago
I was saying I couldn't go on any longer
During this time I fell to my knees and I cried
My happy heart was now fried
And I needed to find a way
Because my mind was so far away
From where it use to be
And Those old words of love are killing me
And just like the clouds
My eyes can't cry for to long
Because I will find a way to be strong
And my bloodshot eyes will go away
They will let me see the sunshine someday
My prayers for some help or advice
Almost costed me the ultimate price
Because I almost let it all go
But I just needed to know
That your not here
That your finally gone
Now it's time to move on
And I know That's a lot easier said then done
But I know that I am the one
So even tho I spent hours looking at my celling
Trying to fight off this depressing feeling
They act like clouds
And just like the clouds
My eyes can't cry for to long
Because I will find a way to be strong
And my bloodshot eyes will go away
They will let me see the sunshine someday
My prayers to be taken to a place
Where my feelings are something I don't have to hide
So I won't have to pull over to cry on the roadside
A place that I won't have to beg for the answer I need
Where My heart won't no longer bleed
I can't lose my way just yet
My face is still dripping wet
From the tears I have cried
Because I know that you lied
just like the clouds
My eyes can't cry for to long
Because I will find a way to be strong
And my bloodshot eyes will go away
They will let me see the sunshine someday
And someday
You will hear the prayers I have said
I have said them a thousand times in my bed

Reviews

[hmarieee]

this honestly made me cry. a really good poem but i know everything its about.
i love you.

[lovejulez03]

This was a nice poem. I like the imagery I get - the sadness of this piece seems to seep in slowly as you read it but soaks in pretty heavy. The only thing I can is that, for me personally, it'd be nice to see it broken up a little and not on the page all together. I very much enjoyed reading this and thank you for sharing :)