'The truth'

'The truth'

A Poem by ...
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my comeback

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If I wanted to be a troll, I could
Some days I think that I should
But honestly that's not who I am
We can't do things cuz we can

I'm a sick little kid, it's true
Tear me with your words, tear through
I've taken worse beatings than this
Make sure your aim's good, don't miss

'An alienated teenager', that stings
The truth hurts more than most things
But I'm not here crying for pity
So that one thing, don't f*****g give me

I'm laughing right now, really am
On the inside at least, if you can
In the end I am what I am
And if you like it, then that's really grand

This poem is about, 'the truth'
From the keyboard of a deranged youth
I didn't write that poem for shock
So all of you, suck on my c**k!

© 2012 ...


Author's Note

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My response to all the comments on the poem called, 'burns' by baby ricochet. I'm just gonna say some shit now, so listen up!

That poem was an honest expression of whatever the fuck I was feeling. Anger, hate, depression, who knows? Or maybe it was forced. I can't even remember. Why did I write it? I jack off to fucking guro porn, that's why. And I've seen a lot of fucked up crazy shit. So, sorry baby richochet, I respect where you're coming from, but your poem isn't any truer than mine. You saw some things, you felt some things, but I think modest mouse puts it best:

'you think you've felt most everything
but don't you know that our hearts are just made out of strings to be pulled?'

ps. I dunno. I'm not looking for a flame war here. I just felt the need to respond to all the hate towards me. I like your poem baby richochet. It's pretty good. This isn't really a response to your poem. It's more a response to all the comments on it.

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Actually I find this piece commendable. You're standing up for your work in the face of controversy in the best way possible. That was the same rational for 'Burns." The worst way possible is a flame war. Like the one that broke out in playing with children's comments section. I think that troll's name was Hilsher. My Poem "Troll" was inspired by him. You're no troll... You're a writer. One that will stand up to some heat. Cuudos

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Baby Ricochet

7 Years Ago

Yawn



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Hahaha Excellent :-D I can tell you're quite unique.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So many things are so true to so many people . . . and none of them are exact nor alike. I think truth, like beauty, lies in the eye of the beholder . . .

Posted 7 Years Ago


Actually I find this piece commendable. You're standing up for your work in the face of controversy in the best way possible. That was the same rational for 'Burns." The worst way possible is a flame war. Like the one that broke out in playing with children's comments section. I think that troll's name was Hilsher. My Poem "Troll" was inspired by him. You're no troll... You're a writer. One that will stand up to some heat. Cuudos

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Baby Ricochet

7 Years Ago

Yawn

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