Two sides

Two sides

A Poem by Xuannu5810
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Four line poem for a contest

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You fear the unseen tempest,
and welcome the warm sun.
Little do you realize, 
they are the same in one. 

© 2019 Xuannu5810


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This poem is true for most things in life. It's wonderfully simple and deep, having more meanings than just the obvious. It's simply beautiful, and I enjoyed it

Posted 5 Months Ago


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DAH
This is wisdom that all of humanity should read,
almost Taoist-like in its message. I love the simplicity.

Keep Pushing!

DAH


Posted 5 Months Ago


Yes, well said, my friend!

Posted 5 Months Ago


Wow. I really love this poem. I see how it shows that sometimes things come together. However, I really feel like this poem speaks a lot on the power of perception. Sometimes yes, we "fear the unseen tempest" but if we change our perception, that unknown challenge can lead to extraordinary things happening in our lives. Well done!

Posted 5 Months Ago


this is Great, i love it :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


Well rhymed and well put. The poem very succinctly describes the human tendency to reject the whole package. In relationships and many other things, all is not gold, and one will never be happy until that is understood. Well done.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Shoshana

5 Months Ago

Agreed! Lol.

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Added on September 6, 2019
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