narutoxhinata

narutoxhinata

A Story by XxKing_SanksxX
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naruto returns home after 3 years training with the pervy sage to find his brother has returned along with him after bieng away for 5 years

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"aaaah im home " said naruto to himslef looking out along konoha the place hasnt changed a bit thought naruto to himself then he heard the pervy sage shout out from below him "hey naruto im gunna go and do some ah.... research now gut hteres someone down here that say he knows you!" "huh?" naruto thought to himself and he jumped down "who pervy sage?" and then he saw him there standing before him clear as day was Visako Uzumaki the older brother he adnt seen in 5 years Visako was waering his old leaf headband. his eyes were now a pinkish red colour instead of the blue that naruto remembered but it still held all the affection that naruto rememberd . Visako had on a strange redish pink suit of armour that seemed to glow a little and he was carrying a sack over his shoulder he took off his helam naruto knew now that it was definitly Visako when he saw his brothers strong jawline  the only thing that had changed about him was the eyes and on his face was a scar that ran down from the top of the left eye and ran down to the bottom of his jawline "hey little bro benn a while hasnt it?"

"visako? visk?" naruto asked in disbelief "iit really is you!" naruto yelled throwing his arms around his big brother who was 2 years older than him

"how longs it been ?" naruto asked letting go of his brother

"5 years of hard training" replied his brother "so how was your 3 years of training?"

"how did you know about that?" naruto asked in surprise

"i was just talking to jariaya here" replied visako "anyway we have a ton of catching up to do! is ichirakus still open?" asked Visako "i havent had any ichiraku ramen in 5 years so you can imagin i am hungry"

"it sure is" replied naruto

the two of them walked over to ichirakus together while jaraiya went off in serch of "reserch opertunitys"

when they got there Visako sat down at once and naruto and he yelled out in unison "hey old man!"

Teuchu looked around to see his two best costomers where back one of which he hadn't seen in over 5 whole years

they both looked so much like each other it was'nt funny the main differance teuchi thought atleast was there jaw line where naruto's was sharper Visk's was more chiseled and he had a slight stubble growing around his mouth and naruto's eyes held mischief where Visako held more wisdom but still held mischief

"Naruto! Visako!" Teuchi siad "long time no see! so how are my two best costomers?"

"considering i havent eaten any of ichiraku's ramen in over 5 years i'm pretty good" said Visk with the grin that was now known as the 'Uzumaki grin'

"well what'll it be boys?" said Teuchi

"well im not that hungry so just ten bowls of miso pork ramen" said Visk with his most serios face on

"i'll have the same!" shouted naruto not willing to be out done by his brother

"so naruto meet any nice girls on your travels with what did you call him again? ah yes 'pervy-sage'" Visk said with a snmile on his face

"well sure there were a lot of nice girls but one girl in perticular really kept coming to mind"

"oh really and who might that be?' said Visk one eyebrow raised

"this girl i know she's apart of a really rich family she lives here in konoha and she was always there for me even when i wasnt there for her and i found myself trying to think of a time where she wasn't there for me but i couldn't think of any"

"hm i understand so you think you might be developing a crush on this girl?" Visk said as his first bowl of ramen was put before him

"maybe.... i'm going to go see her today to ask her out" naruto said as his first bowl was set before him

"ready?" Naruto and Visk said at once

"set?" both of them getting there chopsticks ready

"GO!!" they both shouted as they raced to see who could finish their meal first while Tuechi and Ayame both sat back and watched in amazement at the two of them

 

MEANWHILE

Hinata sneezed one of her usual delicate little sneezes as the young man walking beside her said "bless you"

"o-oh thank you shino" said Hinata to the bug-ninja

"hey Hinata" a boystrous voice that could only be kiba's piped up "you know naruto is back i heard he's in an eating contest with some guy that looks just like him"

"N-n-naruto-kuns back?" hinata squeked the boy she had had a crush on since the acadamy had returned

"yeah did you want to go see him?" shino said in that quiet voice of his

"u-uh i-if its alright with you two?" hinata said queitly "of corse it is!" said kiba loudly as they made there way to the ramen stand

 

meanwhile naruto was up to his second last bowl when he heard his brother burp loudly and say "that was great.well i'm done how 'bout you little bro?"

"HOW DO YOU ALWAYS BEAT ME AT THESE THINGS!" yelled naruto in surprise

"naruot there are lots of new jutsu's that both you and i have learned ut one thing that will never change is the fact you will never beat me at a ramen eating contest"

just then the flaps of the store waved back as kiba shino and a very red hinata walked in "woah" kiba said looking at the two brothers " they do look the same in fact i would swear they were brothers!"

"oh thats right i never told you guys about my older brother" said naruto

"o-older brother?" piped hinata

"oh hey hinata" said naruto going almost as red as his secret admirer

Visk telling instantly that they were both head over heels for each other stepped in "hi my name is Visako Uzumaki knucklehead here's big brother pleased to meet you"

"oh my names kiba and this is shino he doesnt talk much"

"so you must be a tracker ninja and thats your dog i assume?" visako said pionting at the massive dog behind him "i'm guessing your a bug ninja from your clothes and the way thewre seems to be thousands of life presences within you and judging by her eyes i'd say she is a hyuuga" Shino Kiba Hinata and Naruto stared at Visk for a moment before naruto said "how did you know all that!"

"oh its easy i learnt to watch my surroundings and the people within them while i was training" i can also tell hinata's bra size kiba's IQ and shino's relationship with his clan thought visk to himself

 

Later on

"it's getting late and i havnt been back home in my own bed in 5 years i hope you kept the place tidy while i was awya naruto"visk said walking out of the stand

"dont worry i did but uh i might stay with Hinata for a bit ok?"naruto replied

"eh just dont come back too late! you hear me?"visk replied

"yeah yeah whatever" replied naruto laziely

"we might go to" said kiba putting money on the counter for himself and leaving with shino

"so uh hinata i heard something a while back about you" said naruto

"r-really?" replied Hinata shyly "w-what was that?"

"well people where saying that you had a crush on me from acadamy days" naruto said going red

"oh well y-y-yes i-i-ts true i did have a crush on you and i still do"hinata replied thinking that she was finally confessing her love for naruto uzumaki

"well i just want to let you know that i.... i really like you to"naruto said getting close to her

"lets get you home then shall we its getting late" said naruto not even relising that he was now holding his arms around her waist. it was then that the heavans decided to open up and it strted to rain very heavily as they made ther way back to the hyuuga compound

"hey Hinata my place is closer we can wait out the storm there and get dry!" naruto shouted abouve the rain

"U-u-uh o-o-okay" hinata replied quite literaly bieng dragged off to Naruto's apartment

 

 

AT THE APARTMENT

naruto and hinata got into the house just as it strated to hail it was beating agisnt naruto's tin roof "it's not much but it's been home for the past 7 years" naruto said with a grin across his face "the showers through there and i'll get some of my clothes out for you to wear" he said pointing down the halland walked off "oh and i forgot to metion the lock on the bathroom doesnt work so i'll make sure Visk know your here

"HEY VISK!" naruto yelled

"YEAH WHAT IS IT DUMBASS!" yelled visk back seeing as how he was almost asleep

"IT'S RAINIG TOO HARD SO HINATA'S JUST GOING TO WAIT IT OUT HERE OK?"

"YEAH YEAH WHATEVER JUST DON'T DO ANYTHING STUPID OK NARUTO!" yelled visk not even reilising that hinata had heard everyhting and had gone a bright red

"well i'll just get your stuff ready" said Naruto hinata just nodded and walked down the hallway naruto went to his draws and got some of his old clothes to give to hinata he walked back to the bathroom and knocked on the door and said "hey hinata if pass out your wet clothes i'll put them in front of our heater to dry" naruto said hinata just stuck her hand pout with all her wet clothes naruto looked at the pile and frowned aww no bra or panties he thought to himself and then qiuckly banished the thought he had been spending to much time with the pervy sage naruto started up the heater and put hinata's clothes in front of them then walked back to the bathroom with his clothes and a towel and he opend the door a little and slipped the clothes through and walked back to the living room and sat down and watched the dirt bikes of the sand village  it was about ten minutes later when visk walked out and sat down next to him "hey visk i thought you said you were going to bed?"

"yeah well how do you expect me to sleep with this bloody racket going on" he said tiredly
"sorry you could have told me to turn it down"

"i did"

"oh.... sorry"

just then hinata walked out in naruto's clothes and naruot and visako couldnt belive there eyes even if it was one of naruto's shirts it was still big but hinata's bust was so big it made it pit perfectly on her Visk knowing he was the third wheel here instanly got up and went back to his room with a very large smile on his face

"wow hinata if i had known i would have gotten a larger shirt" said naruto qiuckly looking away and blushing it was then thatthey boith heard a pounding at the door and they heard a very harsh voice yell out "HINATA GET OUT HERE THIS INSTANT WE WATCHED YOU GO IN THERE!"

"f-f-father?" she said going really scared there was more pounding at the door which roused Visako from his slumber we walke out to see naruto trying to comfort hinata and he could still hear a pounding at the door "yeah yeah i hear you!" he said and opend the door to find the head of the hyuuga clan pounding at his door with anouther hyuuga male who looked about naruto's age

"can i help you mr hyuuga?" said visako in the politest voice he could muster at this time of the night

"yes you can help! by telling your little brat of a brother to get off my daugter!"

"Visk i swear i didn't do anything!"naruto said trying to defend himself and comfort hinata at the same time "i belive you naruto" visk said he then turned back to the two hyuuga's at his door "listen i can assure you that nothing happend here between your daugter and my little brother now would you like a cup of tea to calm yourself"

"i would like to tale my daugter home! neji go get hinata i dont want to step inside this house of filth" the hyuuga man turned to the younger man visako just put an arm out to stop him "this is my home and hinata is a guest in my hoem while i do recognise your power as her father so i will ask her to come out to you. Hinata?" he turned to the girl and she walked slowly out towards her father and the boy named neji when she got ther she was greeted with a slap across the face by her father naruto was getting angrier and angrier by the second Visk was also getting angrier but he was doing a good job of hiding it  hinata's father started to shout at her "AND WHAT DID I TELL YOU THIS MORNING?! YOU WERE ONLY TO BE ALLOWED OUT OF THE COMPOUND ACCOMPANIED BY THAT MUTT BOY AND THE BUG KID! AND HERE I FIND YOU GETTING CLOSE TO THE UZUMAKI FILTH!" it was then naruto was about to rush this basterd when visako beat him to it his fist flying out coverd in some wiered red/pinkish armour he had been wearing before hinata's father went flieng acroos the street. "now you listen to me you a*****e i can stand you calling my home filth even slapping your own daugter i mean it could be the way you dicapline her but you call my family name filth and i will kill you!" it was then everyone even naruto was scared Visako seemed to be pulsating anger and the strange armour seemed to form around him and he said "deamon release form 1" and the armour coverd his face in the helmet he walked slowly towards the hyuuga man and picked him up by the throat and said "now i'm feeling tired and its taking most of my chakra to kepp this armour going so you are either going to apoligize for A) slapping your daugter for no reason and calling my family filth or you can die here tonight and trust me i will not hesitate!" visako said in a deep voice that didn't sound his own "fine if you really think so you can have her i have no need for such weak heir's" said the hyuuga man looking at disgust at visako  visako dropped the man and said" if that is what you wish she shall stay here with naruto ansd i she will become family and if you think of stealing her back and we will not tolerate your tresspassing.

 

THE NEXT DAY

there came a knock at the door of the house and visako was not in a happy mood naruto had stocked the kitchen up with nothing but ramen and he loved ramen just not for breakfast "yes?" he said opening the door to see an ANBU black op standing there he turned his head at once and yelled "NARUTO! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE THIS TIME?" the ANBU quickly said "actually the hokage would like to see you"

"oh how is the old man?"

"he's dead mr Uzumaki Orochimaru attacked the village and killed him the new hokage is the lagendary sannin lady tsunade"

"oh i see so then i guess i better not keep her waiting"

visako made his way towrds the hokage biulding it had been age's since he last saw this building and it brought back so many great memories of this place his first missions had been issued here he had only been a chunnin when he had left he then reilised that he was outside the hokage's office he knocked on the door and walked in he saw what looked like a thirty something year old woman sitting at a desk surrounded by paper work and behind one of the piles visako senced was a sake bottle

"you wanted to see me my lady" visako said with a bow

"well its hard to tell your naruto's brother from your attitude but seeing you here you look like an older version of naruto" the female hokage said

"well i get that a lot so what is it you wanted to see me about?"

"ah yes" the fith hokage looked around in the paper work on her desk

"ah here it is" she said and handed Visako a piece of paper

it was the third hokage's will and lady tsunade said "flip starit to page 4 line 23

visako did as he was told and read aloud

"and to the Uzumaki brothers who i have always thought as foster grandsons i give you your birthwrite the Namikaze compound yes this is correct you Uzumaki boys are the fourths sons and as such you recieve the money of the inheritence good luck boys i am sorry i cannot be there to see you move into the compound" visako couldnt belive his eye's he was the fourths son he had to get home and tell naruto about this he was about to get up and leave when lady tsunade turned to him and told him some more good news "by the way we talked to some of the towns that you mentioned when you were talking to naruto last night and they all tell the same story they tell of a 2 men one with a large grin and blonde jhair and one who allways wore a hood they all told us that you would help them in any way possible and of the many high level rouge ninja that you defeated so i talked to the coucel and they agreed to let you become a ninja of the leaf agian and you will also get a promotion from chunnin to jonnin" lady tsunade finished

"when do i start?" he said with the Uzumaki grin

"as soon as you move in"

"well i better get going then" he said not even bothering for the door simply jumping straight out the open window behind lady tsunade

"well if i wasnt sure before i am now he is DEFANATLY an Uzumaki" she laughed

Visako was running home when he thought about the third hokage and decided to pay his respects to him he swung by a flowershop on the way he walked into the small store and looked around when he heard a voice behind him "naruto? is that you?" he turned around to find a blonde haired girl wearing an apron with 'Yamanaka flower shop' printed on the front underneath she was wearing purple mini skirt and matching top and bandages around he thighs visajo liked what he saw

"oh im sorry i had you confused with someone else" said the girl

"oh no thats fine" he said "so you know my brother?' he asked the girl

"yes i know him"

" i probly should introduce myself i'm Visako Uzumaki i'm naruto's older brother"

"im Ino Ymanaka" the girl said blushing visako suddenly relised he hadnt done up his red jacket this morning and he was waering one of his old singlets that was a couple of sizes too small showing off his toned body

"oh sorry " visako said quickly zipping up his jacket giving Ino the Uzumaki grin making her blush even more "w-were you looking for something in pertculair?" she asked trieng to change the subject

"well i was thinking of paying my respects to the third hokage today so what flowers would you recomend for me?"Visako asked Ino amiled and showed him around the shop

 

meanwhile naruto woke up after sleeping on the couch all, night he hand't done that for a while and looked around remembering what had happend last night he remembered the fear he got when he saw his brother dressed in that armour and he never got scared of his brother (well when he wasnt in trouble of course)

he walked into his room to see hinata was still fast asleep he was about to start breakfast when Visako got home with a great big smile on his face and he turned to naruto and said "great news dumbass !"

 

AN HOUR LATER AND A LONG STORY

"so you mean......" naruto said unsure wether this was some cruel joke his brother was playing on him or not

'yes we're the only two sons of the fourth hokage" Visako said still grinning "which means we get Namikaze compound and the fourths in heritence"

"we should celebrtae!" yelled naruto and he turned around as he saw Hinata standing there at his bedroom doorway "hey hinata did you hear that! i'm the fourth hokage's son!"

"y-y-yes i heard naruto-kun" hinata said with a stutter

"hey naruto you know what we should do?"

"what's that Visk?"

"we should go down to that club i saw down the road!"

"oh yeah i'll call up my friends i havnt seen them in 3 years!"

 

7:30 at the karyoke place

"hey guys" said naruto to the girls who were arriviving
"hey Ino" called out visako seing the girl from the flower shop. this time she was wearing skinny jeans that showed off some nice curves and a black top on that did the same

"how do you know Ino?" said sakura to Visako seeing a man who looked like an older naruto in green cargo pants and a grey singlet and a black hoodie

"oh we met in her families flower shop the name's visako by the way"he siad to sakura who was wearing a strapless pink dress that ended at just below the knee's

"damn it ino-pig met this hunk of a guy before i did" 

"hey where's hinata?' asked visako

"oh she just went to get our seats inside" naruto said hinata walked back to them with a defeated look on her face she was wearing a pale lavender silk shirt with a light coloured undershirt and lavender jeans her hair was tied up in one pony tail "I-I-I couldnt get our seats naruto-kun the jonnin at the front would'nt even let me in"

"really? why's that?"Naruto asked

"the man said that they couldnt exept any more non vip guests"

"well i'll go have a talk with him you guys wait here for the rest of the group to arrive" visako said walking off naruto was standing there and the two girls were asking so many questions about how his training went and what his brother is like it was then that ten ten wearing her hair in two buns in her usual fasion and waering pink cargo pants ang a pink singlet with the words "i'm a ninja cant touch this" written on it rock lee who was wearing a green teeshirt and black caual pants  and Neji who was waering just a plan white tee shirt and jeans. walked up and Naruto instantly quitend at neji glaring at him Neji seeing this looked at naruto and bowed his head and siad "naruto please hear me i am very sorry for last night,hiashi-sama and i were training when one of our men came back and told us about hinata and we went straight to your house i tried to reason with hiashi-sama but he wouldnt hear any of it i am deeply sorry for everything"

"i forgive you Neji" said naruto calmly looking at the hyuuga "i figured as much i mean i know you dont like me all that much but you consider hinata like your own sister"

rock lee sudenly piped triening to change the subject "hey naruto check it out theres a guy over there who looks like you exept older"

naruto said "oh yeah thats my brother Visako"calmly he was just about to explain when choji Kiba Shikamaru and shino arrived  shino wearing what he usaully wore and shikamaru wearing all black exept his jacket which was green choji was wearing Jeans and a grey hoodie with 'Konaha Industries' on the front and kiba was wearing his usaul hoodie but with jeans it wa sthen visako came back and said "hey guys good news a got us a spot in the vip section tis club is owned and run by a couple of friends of mine from way back"

"sweet so shall we go in?" naruto asked they all nodded and started chatting Visako pulled naruto to the side "hey bro i know you like hinata and hinata likes you but as your older brother and seeing as how dad isnt here i need to tell you hinata me and you are now living in the same house its a big house so i dont want to find you guys 'sharing' more than a hug or a kiss okay? at least not till you guy's are married if that ever happens"

"dont worry bro i wouldnt dream of it and by the way who was the friend?"naruto asked

"oh remember my old crew kurt blake byron and james?"

"yeah"

"well they bought this place and now they own and run the place"

"they were about to walk inside when Visako was stopped by the bouncer agian naruto got a good look at him he had a shrot stubble mowhawke and dreadlocks at the end and he smiled at visako as he walked through and said "hey bro we gonna play a set tonight?"

"sure thing man is james still DJing?"
"yeah he plays here he should be halfway through a set"

"ok man what about kurt and blake? they still play?"

"sure do bro but we dont have a singer "

"i think i can fix that little dilema for you" said visako with a smile and they walked in byron going back to his post for the time bieng they walked in to see a DJ in black sun glasses not wearuing a shirt showing off his toned body and black cargo pants jumping up and down to a beat at the end of the club which was surprisingly biog there were so many lights everywhere it was hard to see and naruto turned to Visako (having never been night-clubbing before) was dazed as soon as he walked in

visako however was smiling already his eyes becoming use to the bright flashes the DJ was playing a tune he had heard so many times before sub focus rock it remix he was jumping up and down and the crowd was shouting (mostly women staring at his muscles) "DJ JIMMY! DJ JIMMY! DJ JIMMY!" Visako walked up to the bar and he saw two of his old friends standing there "hey bartender i'll have a hell special" knowing this was a drink that Kurt had made up but had only shown his friends he turned around about to tell him he didnt know what that was when he saw one of his old friends standing there "visk man havent seen you since ages! what the hell have you been doing these past 5 years"

"not much man not much" blake looked over and waved to Visalko and started to serve some other patrons while Kurt started to make Visako his 'Hell special' only they knew how you where ment to drink it kurt got all the ingrediants ready and poured them all in in a special order then he used a jutsu onlty he iknew and said "hell's special jutsu" and the drink set alight then visako picked up the drink and went and sat with their group visako was about to pull up a chair when Ino  said "hey Visako i saved you a seat" and pulled up a chair next to herself and naruto all the while asking lots of questions it was then that jimmy fionished his set and much to all the girls dismay he put his shirt back on and walked down to where Visako was sitting with naruto he pulled up a chair between him and Ino winking at her at the same time she just blushed and looked away "so are you going to play a set with us tonight" james said hopefully

Visako looked at james and said "sure but i may be a little rusty" it was then a cheer went up for james "WE WANT JIMMY WE WANT JIMMY WE WANT JIMMY!" james looked at Visako and said "well?"

"ok ok you get the guys i need to do something first" Visako said turning to the group he said "you guy's wanna see something cool? me and my friends used to be a band you know and a good one" it was then jimmy came back with blake kurt and byron and they were all smiling  ear to ear they knew this was going to be a night to remember Visako turned to their group and said i'll give you guys a shout out in fact you guys come into the mosh pit we got here and he led them to this place where all jimmys fan girls where screaming out his name Naruto swore he heard shizune's voice calling out jame's name too Visako and his friends went up on stage byron went to the drum kit that was behind the rest of the gear jimmy's Dj set to the right the mike in the middle the bass in front of james and the lead guitar in front of byron blake ppicked up the bass his black curly hair and glasses making him appear more soft than he actually was kurts over spiked jet blake hair gave his inner rock star away and jimmy had his shirt off again to the fan girls approval Visako turned to the rest of the guys and said "we cant let james have all the fun can we?"and took off his jacket and shirt makinfg all the girls scream loader at his toned muscles showing naruto was squashed up agianst hinata from all the people making there way to the dancefloor james turned and said to Visako "hey bro lets warm up with 'dynamite'" Visako turned to the others and said "that alriight with you two i mean you guys wont be playing" they just nodded it was then jimmy started the beat and visako started

"i came to dance dance dance dnace

i hit hthe floor cause them ma plans plans plans plans

im wearing all my favourite brands brands brands

give me some space for both my hands hands hands"

all the girls were screaming (Ino and Sakura in perticular) but naruto and hinata were just going with the flow and dancing together cheering with the crowd rest of the night became a blur as they danced together they vaguely remebered Visako giving a shout ot tp them and thier group then playing linkin park and byrons head thrashiing and his dread llocks bouncing as he played his drums kurt had sweat dripping down his shirt making his shirt see through which drove the female crowd wild they were halfway through linkin parks "leave out all the rest" when the attack came Visako was singing when the first hit came and shook the club the band stopped instantly and looked around someone looked out the front and shouted "OROCHIMARU AND THE SOUND VILLAGE ARE ATTACKING AGAIN!" the ninjas all wasted no time they all  darted back home to collect there weapons no time to change they all met at the village gate the first people there were Visako naruto james blake and byron

© 2011 XxKing_SanksxX


Author's Note

XxKing_SanksxX
i do not own naruto in any way if i did he would be married to hinata by now
and i do not own any song in this fan fic they belong ot thier respective artists

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A quite hard flow to follow, but once you do, you take the reader on a journey of self expression and tolerated over emotion, a talented and clever plot that ceases the case of antiquity and moral code, well done, great read.

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