Us
A Poem by Dakota
 I couldn't stop thinking of cheesy romance soo its kinda sappy 
Our love...
Is never ending.
Our hearts...
Beat for each other.
Our minds...
Cross as one.
Our lips...
Cave more.
Our smile...
Blinds the dark.
Our souls...
Are pure.
Our covorsations...
Short but sweet.
Our strength...
Together, unstopable.
Our children...
Beautiful angels.
Just like ourselves.
© 2009 Dakota
Author's Note
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it is sappy
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AWWWWWWW! this is so cute! i just love poems like this! very well done
Posted 14 Years Ago
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There were a few grammatical things here and there, and this does need some shining up 'round the edges as usual, but I'm not lying when I say that this is one of the most beautiful pieces of poetry I have ever read.
Posted 14 Years Ago
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Aw, this is cute!! I'm a total sucker for a good love poem. I loved it :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
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Added on November 10, 2009
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Dakota Newmarket, ON, Canada
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I right according to my fellings and moods. I'm Random xD Okay today I just found out I have an ego. Oh great. I have had a bad childhood and have exparemented on my emostions with diffrent things lik.. more..
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