The Dream Was Dead

The Dream Was Dead

A Poem by XxWhatsername86

The dream passed away in silence...

With gravity eyes that clenched the moon.

For all who would see her that dusk,

In darkness fell their shying swoon.


I swore the dream was dead that hour.

And swore more that she would never return.

This requiem of imagination...

Would never let its fires burn.


But then there came a chillest voice...

From darkest waters, from black, murky tarn.

And the portrait of my soulless window...

Saw coldness in the eyes redrawn.


For I had thought this dream was dead...

But no, amazing...

The dream survived.


For my soul slept long enough to wither...

And dream that it had only died.

© 2013 XxWhatsername86


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Awesome poem! I haven't read anything like this in forever! Kinda blown away!

Posted 4 Years Ago


haunting, that was the first word to pass my thoughts after i read this piece and that's exactly the description i have for this. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Hypnotic words. Well written.

Posted 7 Years Ago


XxWhatsername86

7 Years Ago

Thank you!
Wow! Very powerful poem! Very well written darling

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wow what a powerful poem! Well penned my dear.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I absolutley loved your poem, it really drew me in, somehow reminded me of Poe, well penned :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


XxWhatsername86

7 Years Ago

Why thank you very much! :)
annabellee

7 Years Ago

you're most welcome :)

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Added on July 1, 2013
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"All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream." Edgar Allan Poe I'm 24 (July 12, 1994) and my name is Kim. I love taxidermy (I have a huge collection) and I'm a full time taxidermist. .. more..

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