You, My Hopeless Dream

You, My Hopeless Dream

A Poem by Adora.xo
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Kind of a stream-of-consciousness? Bleh

"

You said

I always know

What to say,

So let me say this…

I am too strong

To let one man

Be so                       careless,

And break me.


                                        You were never mine…


I am so hidden

Inside of myself,

I’ve forgotten

How not to be            kind.


But you were my dream…


Let me say

That I am too

Tired…

To care if I                   bleed,

But have mercy…


I am fragile…


I am so far away

Inside my mind,

I thought I was unbreakable

For a                             while.


And then you came to me…


And let me say this…

That I forgot

Myself…

With a single                hope

That we could be…


But you were never mine.


You said

I always knew

What to say,

So let me say this…

I am broken,

But I will be fine…


And so I will let you go

Like the hopeless dream

You were meant to be…

Because this is the right thing to say,

Even

if

it

kills

me…

© 2013 Adora.xo


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wow this is absolutley fabolous, I loved everything about it, loved the structure of your poem and the emotions really captured me, I can relate to this very well. Absolutley flawless. You're very talented.
Gorgeous write. thank you for sharing. 100/100

Posted 7 Years Ago


Adora.xo

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
annabellee

7 Years Ago

you're most welcome :)
This is.. absolutely amazing. Also heartbreaking, it's unbelievable how much I can relate to this poem. I love how at just the beginning and just the end you put in the "you said i always knew what to say", and i don't know if the tense of the 'know'/'knew' was changed on purpose, but either way it makes it all the more heartbreaking to see how things have changed. Lovely write

Posted 7 Years Ago


Adora.xo

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I don't know if I should be glad that this piece is relate-able, because it's sad.. read more

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Adora.xo

The One That's Non-Existant As Far As You're Concerned., British Columbia, Canada



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