Forget

I took a well known poem but changed it

Forget the sound of his voice

Remember now he made his choice

Forget the way you used to feel

Remember now he isn't real

Forget the way you once were

Remember now he's with her

Forget the way he used to laugh

Remember now he's not your half

Forget the way you once tried

Remember now the ways he lied

Forget all the sweet temptation

Remember now there's no relation

Forget the times he held your hand

Remember now he doesn't understand

Forget the love you once shared

Remember now he doesn't care

Forget the things he used to send

Remember now he's just your friend

Reviews

[RedInk524]

Wow! Very good! Excellent topic and voice! I love the repitition and pattern! Not only that but you put in a good rhyme! Absolutely perfect! A favorite! Definitely your best. Im sending read requests out to other people for this, this needs to be shared. :D

[Tasha]

I really liked this. I loved the repetition and the pattern. Great job!
♥ Ta'Shandra

[WynterPhoenix]

Hmmm...It kind of reminds me of Emily Dickinson's "Heart We Will Forget Him". I can't be certain that's the poem you are referring to in your headline, but it's what I thought of since the first line. This is a great write! Well done.

[Dahlia Phoenix]

The rhyme scheme is amazing!
Nicely used and this is incredibly well written with emotion.
Just f****n' amazing!

[.......]

So very nicely done!
Amazing rhyme scheme!

[Sweet Emotions]

This is powerful. It give the sense of moving on, but slowly. I like the pattern.

[Kayla K]

I fully agree this is AMAZING. It's so true, I can tell you went through something bad. Thanks for sharing

[Scisenheart]

really good, so sad, and i love how well you have used repitition.
Scisenheartxx :D