This Emptiness

This Emptiness

A Poem by Anonymous/Anjaan ( Yash V.)
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The writer is just out of words....trying to explain this absence ....this EMPTINESS....

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This Emptiness

Ever since you left my couch
left me to watch the movie myself
the movie which is "Life" ,
It has turned upside down.
All the happiness is soaked by dementors
and all the sadness has washed away itself.
This truly is 
EMPTINESS

I don't know what to say
how to explain
when to describe
this feeling called
EMPTINESS

These days I just 
lie on my bed
gather the thoughts
remember the cheers
which are just invisible,
trying to lessen this
EMPTINESS 

Hope one day
I find another soul
like my own
who is starving
surviving this 
EMPTINESS

© 2013 Anonymous/Anjaan ( Yash V.)


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You've described it well...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anonymous/Anjaan ( Yash V.)

8 Years Ago

:D
Sir...u have definitely transformed urself to one of the best out here....i remember you struggling for words ..and here you are now....A TOP WRITER....SIR...:D..alwayz keep it up....

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anonymous/Anjaan ( Yash V.)

8 Years Ago

Man-O-Man...ur making me blush..am always thankful to people like u...who REALLY read my work...thnq.. read more
Man...these lines makes me aware of the absence of a soul of the writers... surely going in the library...cheer up....ur writes always gets me cheered...I need one more cheering poem of you SIR...U = Awesome

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anonymous/Anjaan ( Yash V.)

8 Years Ago

Man...that was one big frm ur big heart...man...dnt make me go to cloud nine..:D...nd yeah...i will .. read more
don't know if its ur best work...certainly liked it

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anonymous/Anjaan ( Yash V.)

8 Years Ago

Yeah..man i know....( it ws juss fr publicity XD ) nd U cn improve urself...ech nd every single..mom.. read more

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