Do You Remember

Do You Remember

A Poem by Blossom
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love gone wrong

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dancing in the moonlit night
do you remember what you said
it's etched to clearly in my mind
it's really hard to forget

Together Forever, was what I believed
yet I wander aimlessly
my other half, that sounds so wrong
yet that is what you said
do you remember now

Our love so strong,
tied by red
I wish it was true
it hurts so bad

committed a sin, I had no part of
get blamed for it all
that's how it went so

do you remember,
what you said,
as you took my life
that faithful night

Our love binds us together
why wasn't it true
I didn't want this at all
yet I fell so hard

do you remember love,
who I am
I am the lover
you killed with your bare hands


© 2010 Blossom


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Great piece!!

I really enjoyed how at the end it wasn't such a big shock like *gasp* she was murdered. I got some hint of it in the line

"committed a sin, I had no part of"

At first I thought virginity, but if you love the person why would you refuse? I kind of got the idea something went wrong and that last line just nailed it. Good work!

Keep writing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.



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yes, I know... It hurts.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great piece!!

I really enjoyed how at the end it wasn't such a big shock like *gasp* she was murdered. I got some hint of it in the line

"committed a sin, I had no part of"

At first I thought virginity, but if you love the person why would you refuse? I kind of got the idea something went wrong and that last line just nailed it. Good work!

Keep writing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Saskatoon, Saskatchewan, Canada



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